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Post by Shane Borderland on Jun 13, 2012 18:43:54 GMT -4
I was wanting to know what you guys thought about my comebacck RP. Its been like 7 months since i have rp'ed with Borderland, so take it easy...
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 13, 2012 19:08:05 GMT -4
(Puts on Jeff Halloween Mask)
You won't get feedback if you don't post a link to the rp. Kash could have told you that..
(Takes off Mask, Drops it and runs out of the room)
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Post by The Soul Of Philly on Jun 13, 2012 20:16:21 GMT -4
When I copy and paste it into word so I can read what Borderland said...I'll let you know.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 13, 2012 22:05:21 GMT -4
Yeah he's always used that "On The Rag" deep red color. I tell him to change it and it's like he ignores me. Rude.
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Post by Shane Borderland on Jun 13, 2012 22:32:11 GMT -4
im not going to listen to everything you ask for bro. Hell since no one likes me anymore, got to have something for you guys to bitch at
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 14, 2012 3:22:12 GMT -4
The red font is hard as hell to read. Go Orange or something not Demon Red. I have to highlight those parts to read them. It's suggestion my friend, helps us read your stuff and give proper feedback.
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Post by Shane Borderland on Jun 14, 2012 6:39:56 GMT -4
Ill go back to using regular red then guys
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Post by Nick Watson on Jun 14, 2012 11:07:45 GMT -4
I concur, the writing is very hard to read.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 14, 2012 14:30:06 GMT -4
YIPPIE! Borderland is changing it up! Haha, this is a good thing.
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Post by Evan De Parker on Jun 14, 2012 17:38:14 GMT -4
Well. The obvious has already been stated. Moving on...
The Good: Solid RP for a returning wrestler. I have a basic gist of what Borderland did before going on LOA, so that's a good thing. He also does a good job at putting Wolves on notice and letting him know what to expect. He's completely focused on this match in particular, and it's kind of realistic for someone that had to step away from the business to be a little wary about their future, so I can't knock Borderland on being ambiguous about some of Shane West's questions. The interactions in the beginning were also nice to see.
The Bad: In all honesty? Not the most compelling of RPs once you hit the halfway point. The very beginning had me gripped, and the beginning of the interview also had me enticed judging by everyone's reactions to Borderland... and then after that, it kind of fell flat. Yes, it was necessary for us to get to know the Borderland character, a summary of his past, and a summary of his future intentions but for some reason I found myself anxious to skip ahead at some parts. Maybe next time there should be a little bit more action, especially when you already have several "extras" in the scene that you can bounce lines off of.
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Post by Shane Borderland on Jun 16, 2012 22:39:57 GMT -4
Thanks Evan for the feedback man
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