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Post by biggs on Oct 14, 2012 20:35:54 GMT -4
Most of the show is posted. Just waiting on the Main Event, but it's my own fault for not making sure somebody took it up earlier.
Big thanks to Julius, Bailey, and Callahan for writing matches. Thanks to Knuckles, Julius, TJ, Callahan, Bailey, Sally, Jair, Rebel, and Atken for segs. If I missed anyone, let me know.
Also, the announcement of Borderland's replacement is still to come!
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Post by yarmouth1 on Oct 14, 2012 20:49:09 GMT -4
You missed My segment for the show Biggs mate it not there fella nut veiling show mate
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Post by biggs on Oct 14, 2012 20:56:39 GMT -4
Check your PM box, Yarmouth.
Also, Callahan just got the Main Event into me, so I need to add entrances and write the ending. It'll be up shortly.
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Post by chaos lite on Oct 14, 2012 21:07:32 GMT -4
Nut veiling?
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Post by biggs on Oct 14, 2012 21:33:14 GMT -4
Main Event is up! Big thanks to Michael Callahan for taking it up last minute!
Also, AJP, love your avatar with GIR.
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Post by The Soul Of Philly on Oct 14, 2012 22:07:16 GMT -4
Welp, looks like I'm never getting a world title reign...
Guess I have to go the Terry Marvin way: send in 18 segments and write the whole show myself. I have to learn how to manage my time better.
More feedback after Bound For Glory/tomorrow
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Post by Johnny Rebel on Oct 14, 2012 22:32:21 GMT -4
- Good opening segment with Callahan. I fully expected him to come out and bash the EEC megastars and it was a nice little swerve. It set the tone for later on in the evening. - But the momentum is killed with Knuckles. I enjoyed the short segment last week where Knuckles complained about bad referee treatment but his segment this week is strange and unnecessary. Seriously dude, it's time to take a break from the midgets. - The "na-na, you can't touch him" angle always add a nice touch on to a feud, and Farquhar plays it perfectly. He's going to crap himself when TJ finally gets his hands on him. - Tough loss for Raab. Keep working, girl! You have really improved since you first came in to the APW and had a little bit of bad luck with a motivated Knuckles this week. - I like Bailey starting to associate with J-Hop. When Jair first came to the APW, he wanted to work with Bailey, and I'm glad to see the two characters finally work together. They are a natural fit, and I enjoyed the man-date being interrupted by Sally. Honestly, the build up to Asylum has been drastically different than the Overdrive. There isn't a whole lot of history between the five, now six, of us, while the Overdrive contingent has been at each others throats for months. It's been strictly psychological with each competitor trying to gain a little bit of an edge over the other somehow. Very compelling reads all around! - Atken's segment was a prime example of that...especially with this line: Atken: Look... I can't see this night posing much of a challenge. I'm just out there to ensure that my esteemed colleagues in the chamber do a suitable amount of damage to each other. I'm merely serving as the facilitator in all of this.
I love the angle that Atken's taking here. His one and only goal is to make sure that the four who are in the main event wear each other down while he sits pretty. - I'm not going to feedback my own segment except for a comment: I hope they are reading well. I'm trying to use Rebel's usual shenanigans to convince Bailey that they'd be better off working together. I figured it was something different than the usual, "I'm going to kick your heiney" type stuff. - Good build-up to Kash/Hopkins at One Night in Hell. I'm really looking forward to that match. - The twists and turns never end with Anthony Bailey and Michael Callahan. I liked the sinister side of Callahan coming out here...it's an added dimension to the character that we haven't seen yet. Well done to the both of you for working together there. - Speaking of sinister...poor Mr. Dangerous. One day that guy is going to be APW champ. - Good ending to the tag match. I was expecting some kind of tomfoolery, and it was done well, with Atken blowing the whistle as soon as contact was made, and protected himself from any violence that may have came his way, which ultimately led to the addition of Keaton Saint to the EEC match. First of all, seriously? Second of all, seriously? As if the match wasn't stacked enough, the addition of Saint will send ripples through Asylum. One of the best characters in all of e-fedding and APW never fails to surprise me. Can we have Borderland back, please? Welcome to the show, Keaton! |
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Post by Metrodamus on Oct 14, 2012 22:50:44 GMT -4
- Good opening segment with Callahan. I fully expected him to come out and bash the EEC megastars and it was a nice little swerve. It set the tone for later on in the evening. - But the momentum is killed with Knuckles. I enjoyed the short segment last week where Knuckles complained about bad referee treatment but his segment this week is strange and unnecessary. Seriously dude, it's time to take a break from the midgets. - The "na-na, you can't touch him" angle always add a nice touch on to a feud, and Farquhar plays it perfectly. He's going to crap himself when TJ finally gets his hands on him. - Tough loss for Raab. Keep working, girl! You have really improved since you first came in to the APW and had a little bit of bad luck with a motivated Knuckles this week. - I like Bailey starting to associate with J-Hop. When Jair first came to the APW, he wanted to work with Bailey, and I'm glad to see the two characters finally work together. They are a natural fit, and I enjoyed the man-date being interrupted by Sally. Honestly, the build up to Asylum has been drastically different than the Overdrive. There isn't a whole lot of history between the five, now six, of us, while the Overdrive contingent has been at each others throats for months. It's been strictly psychological with each competitor trying to gain a little bit of an edge over the other somehow. Very compelling reads all around! - Atken's segment was a prime example of that...especially with this line: Atken: Look... I can't see this night posing much of a challenge. I'm just out there to ensure that my esteemed colleagues in the chamber do a suitable amount of damage to each other. I'm merely serving as the facilitator in all of this.
I love the angle that Atken's taking here. His one and only goal is to make sure that the four who are in the main event wear each other down while he sits pretty. - I'm not going to feedback my own segment except for a comment: I hope they are reading well. I'm trying to use Rebel's usual shenanigans to convince Bailey that they'd be better off working together. I figured it was something different than the usual, "I'm going to kick your heiney" type stuff. - Good build-up to Kash/Hopkins at One Night in Hell. I'm really looking forward to that match. - The twists and turns never end with Anthony Bailey and Michael Callahan. I liked the sinister side of Callahan coming out here...it's an added dimension to the character that we haven't seen yet. Well done to the both of you for working together there. - Speaking of sinister...poor Mr. Dangerous. One day that guy is going to be APW champ. - Good ending to the tag match. I was expecting some kind of tomfoolery, and it was done well, with Atken blowing the whistle as soon as contact was made, and protected himself from any violence that may have came his way, which ultimately led to the addition of Keaton Saint to the EEC match. First of all, seriously? Second of all, seriously? As if the match wasn't stacked enough, the addition of Saint will send ripples through Asylum. One of the best characters in all of e-fedding and APW never fails to surprise me. Can we have Borderland back, please? Welcome to the show, Keaton! Why would you wish that on Biggs. Honestly, Keaton's an awesome addition to the match but I'm saddened that we're losing him on Overdrive. I'm going to be like the only face now  . |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Oct 14, 2012 23:28:00 GMT -4
-TJ-: There are times like this week where I didn't write a segment or a match for that matter. Doing that might help but it doesn't always win Championships. I slacked this show and will make it up for the PPV and there after for sure. Just saying. I'll give a more detailed feedback on this later. Texans game has me on a fix. I will say Saint on Asylum? Nice to see bigger names coming over but it's because of the work we guys on Asylum do that get these guys seeing us. So we're doing our jobs on this show and welcome to Saint. A Vet that gives SO MUCH to any roster.
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Post by Reaver on Oct 14, 2012 23:29:45 GMT -4
sorry to disappoint reb? the segment was meant to add on to the rp that i posted this week. it might not have been necessary now, but ull see where it leads in the next month or so.....something im working on slowly while i prepare for the ppv. was hoping to see a Raab and Yarmouth segment (maybe i missed it?) but i didnt. also im curious as to who else is in this ppv match (i miss this too?) i dunno. im so proud of Atken. he has made himself out to be considered a REAL threat and i hope the rest of the people here take him seriously. i really hope TJ has it in him to beat Farq. he is 1 tough beast but if anybody has the ability, its TJ. id like to think that the hype for the PPV is there, just need the PPV  |
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Oct 14, 2012 23:31:58 GMT -4
ONIH = Smear campaign to embarrass me by putting me against some of the five best people that play this game smh lol.
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Post by Metrodamus on Oct 14, 2012 23:36:09 GMT -4
ONIH = Smear campaign to embarrass me by putting me against some of the five best people that play this game smh lol. Yeah - there's not a weak link like me in there to prey on. |
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Post by C.J. Gates on Oct 14, 2012 23:47:59 GMT -4
I'm going to be like the only face now . You forgot about me! I haven't read the show yet, but the fact that I'm reading that Saint has been added is...well...kind of crazy, really. Just keep adding top talent to that EEC match! |
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Oct 14, 2012 23:49:14 GMT -4
ONIH = Smear campaign to embarrass me by putting me against some of the five best people that play this game smh lol. Yeah - there's not a weak link like me in there to prey on. HA! Not true. |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Oct 15, 2012 1:20:17 GMT -4
While I'm not a big fan of bringing in more OD guys, I welcome Saint because I know he will benefit Asylum as has both Sally and Rebel. So as long as the names who come are useful and helping then I'm all for it. Solid fucking show though, this PPV is gonna be great.
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Post by yarmouth1 on Oct 15, 2012 5:56:57 GMT -4
sorry to disappoint reb? the segment was meant to add on to the rp that i posted this week. it might not have been necessary now, but ull see where it leads in the next month or so.....something im working on slowly while i prepare for the ppv. was hoping to see a Raab and Yarmouth segment (maybe i missed it?) but i didnt. also im curious as to who else is in this ppv match (i miss this too?) i dunno. im so proud of Atken. he has made himself out to be considered a REAL threat and i hope the rest of the people here take him seriously. i really hope TJ has it in him to beat Farq. he is 1 tough beast but if anybody has the ability, its TJ. id like to think that the hype for the PPV is there, just need the PPV I did do a segment Knucks but fucked up putting the wrong coding and also using the wrong commentators in it soas reble poited out so he didn't go with it in the end and pm'ed me which is fine. I really do need to pay more attention to details like that in the future. As for the show great stuff and wow Keaten Saint omfg were in for a treat. Nice segments in the show all really well written just a little gripe on my match could have done with a bit more action in it but still was well written. The Kash v Hopkins story line is coming round nicely and the parking lot brawl should be awesome. And Knucks for the death match it was announced that any member of the Meltdown roster that ain't booked on the pay per view will be in the match and if they win they will be drafted to Asylum which is good for Asylum as there are some top Role players on there all ready. Another well written show and Kudos to everyone involved. |
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Post by Jules on Oct 15, 2012 9:18:57 GMT -4
I'm going to be like the only face now . You forgot about me! I haven't read the show yet, but the fact that I'm reading that Saint has been added is...well...kind of crazy, really. Just keep adding top talent to that EEC match! And me! Btw Knucks, thanks for crushing my self-esteem  As for the show, my own thoughts were that it did an okay job going into the PPV. There still seem to me a few loose ends for the EEC, but maybe that's the intended point. I'll agree that some segments seem out of place. The Farq interference in the TJ match was a tad inconsistent with the earlier order from Reginald, but I take full responsibility for that for not PMing the writer of that match to inform them of such. The announcement at the end of the show elevated this one as a 'go home' and I'm glad to see Keaton Saint getting a much-deserved main event 'push'. I genuinely feel there are no weak links in that match now, and like OD any one of the six involved could walk away as Champion. |
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Post by yarmouth1 on Oct 15, 2012 9:35:44 GMT -4
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Post by Lord Raab on Oct 15, 2012 11:24:40 GMT -4
I had ideas for a segment this week but it just wasn't appropriate for where the location was. Let's just say that I got segment plans with someone for the PPV so all is not lost and I am more or less working more on my RP's than trying to get a segment in at the moment.
The show overall was really well written and I can say that I am a big fan of this Julius and TJ rivalry as both of them know how to hype the match up really well. It will be a shame to see it come to an end after the PPV unless there are plans of it continuing.
Interesting sets of segments for the Elimination Chamber competitors as that is also hyping up really nicely and I really can't wait to see it all unfold especially with the announcement of Keaton Saint being apart of it all. That alone should hype things even farther.
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Post by Reaver on Oct 15, 2012 12:37:32 GMT -4
LOL u no i luv ya Farq.....
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