Your feedback is greatly appreciated

[John "Sheriff" McBride]

I am curious how other people respond to the way I write my character. The dialogue can be tough to read through for those not familiar with a drawn southern accent. I am wondering if this elements adds to or takes away from the role-play.

Your criticisms and insight is greatly appreciated.

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