How does it look

[Nick Watson]

I poured my heart and soul into a 47,000 character rp. I know over zealous, but I wanted to make sure that it was good read and it just wrote itself. I was wondering if you guys could tell me how it looks and be honest, I won't bite.
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[John Green]

Damn it. Thiw was great and kicked my first rp's ass. Love the format by the way. Trash talk was fucking excellent. I give it a good 4.5 out of 5

[Level-Two]

Just wanted to let you guys know, I'm going to try my damn hardest to get something up tonight, if not early morning tomarrow.

I'm not sure, but I MAY not be able to get two up. I hate to leave you guys in the lurch with the last minute roleplays, so I'm going to work at it, and we'll see how my chips fall.

[Nick Watson]

Good luck Level.