YOU JUST A BABY Feedback [05-05-12]

[sykes]

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^ YOU JUST A BABY [Asylum RP] ^

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Alright. I know it isn't the best and I know it might come off a little out there. However I had to rush to get something done. I have a lot to do today and I'm not sure if I'll be able to get a second one in [though I'll try]

In the short amount of time that I did it. I did have a lot of fun writing it. It actually flowed really well together but at the same time it does feel rushed. I'm hoping I can make up for it a little later today. If not though here it is.

Tell me whatcha think: the good, the bad, and everything in between! Thanks in advance everyone!

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[B.A. Styles]

I honestly found the RP to be brilliant ^_^...even though part of me felt like I've somehow influenced this RP lol. >_>

I found it funny have, in the agruement, David did quite decent trash talking against my character and I wish you luck in the match (even though I doubt I'll write a 2nd RP since I have next to no time to fully write one in anymore). ^_^

I think what I liked the most was your alterations on a shitty song, thus making it funny (Since I was never a Bieber fan, I just use his base for cheap heat, lol).

PS: Feel free to feed me back if you can, thank you for a fun read. ^_^

[sykes]

Ha, thanks dude. Yes, you're rp inspired me to do something similar. I had already planned on taking a couple Biebz jabs but wasn't really sure how it was going to turn out/didn't have an idea at the time. Your rp was brilliant thus made me run with the parody.

I'll def get around to giving you some feedback here in a bit. Just got done handling some of the business I gotta do today. So look forward to it in the next couple hours. I too wish you nothing but the best of luck. Both rps were very entertaining and I hope we get that across to those who read/judge them. May the best man win in the end. =)[/size]