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Post by Reaver on May 18, 2012 20:30:38 GMT -4
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Post by Michael Callahan on May 19, 2012 14:17:49 GMT -4
Well allow me to start off with the good by saying yes, you're a funny guy. The whole Prick/Toker/Revolution Boy saga threw me back to the late 90's when I used to get up early to watch saturday morning cartoons. That was definitely a plus point.
The general content of your dialogue is good and gramatically you make a lot of sense but I think the key thing is here that your party piece is absolutely riddled with spelling and typo errors which will immediately hamper even the most creative trash talking pieces. Also, your sense of colour is horrible. These are all things that can be remedied by clicking preview before you post, or running a major spellcheck over the thing and proof-reading your promo's before you post them up.
It seems a shame that a talented guy like yourself gets hampered by something as simple as not proof reading.
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Post by Reaver on May 19, 2012 14:48:39 GMT -4
the problem for me is that my Microsoft word is not working so i have to do it all on my word pad which doesnt have said features. i made due with wat i could and i dont think there were many grammical errors at all. wat ur reading is his accent IE: Playin', wonderin', etc
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Post by Michael Callahan on May 19, 2012 14:53:14 GMT -4
Try OpenOffice. That's what I use to facilitate my writing. Great, free product that comes with a spell checker.  Also, if you could kindly return the feedback favour in my thread? I'd be most grateful. |
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Post by Reaver on May 19, 2012 14:56:16 GMT -4
Try OpenOffice. That's what I use to facilitate my writing. Great, free product that comes with a spell checker. Also, if you could kindly return the feedback favour in my thread? I'd be most grateful. will do, good thing i already have open office |
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