Bloody Your Nose, End of Days and The Future of MC

[Michael Callahan]

... Michael Callahan.

So I've been pitted against my toughest challenge yet in Sally Talfourd and cranked out what I can only hope are 2 4k scorchers of infinite fury. I'd like to ask the panel of APWers to judge my contributions, how I can improve on my A-Game and if anyone has any comments on the character and the direction I'm going. And anything they'd like to see me try in the future.

Bloody Your Nose

End of Days

All comments welcome. Even if it's to just tell me I'm a doucher.

[Reaver]

in all honesty, i preferred ur first rp over the second. i personally like the match relevance where as the second focused a lil more on ur "politcal" career. i see this match going either way.

best of luck to u sir

[Michael Callahan]

I'd say they'd both had a fair bit of match relevance. I'd say his promo section at the end of the second one was a lot more match relevant than the first one. Thank you for the feedback nonetheless.

[Metrodamus]

I know we spoke about your first earlier but I'm in disagreement with Knuckles as I felt your second was better. Maybe because it seemed to touch on the things we spoke about before, but I felt it was an absolutely solid piece and you made that style your own. You've always been one of my favorite writers - one of the reasons I've always wanted to work with you on collaborations etc. and it really hit home with the second RP. You've got a unique style of writing that really works, and I think the ideas behind the piece were superbly executed. I really, really implore people to read both of them as together I think they capped what I've heard (as I've not followed as close as it appears I should have) was a stellar feud.

Also, the link to the second role play is this, not what you have up there: End of Days

[sykes]

I have to start off by saying that Callahan is one of my favorite characters in the efed world. I have done this for a really long time and I would say that he is in my top ten favorite characters. Just because of what you've done with him, the creativity and the originality of the character. It's like something I have never seen before.

Now onto the rps. I loved them tbh quite honest with you and there's nothing I can really say that was bad about them. You did a great job balancing between character development and match relevance. You did well in selling both of them and I think you pretty much hit the nail on the head every single time.

It was nice to see Callahan in a non-title feud and by going up against his toughest competitor yet. You and Sally did real well with building up the feud and it was interesting all around. Seeing as the rps ended up getting you the win you needed. I can see this launching Callahan on the next level and the level I am sure you want him on.

Good stuff dude, keep it up