Starting to get back into the feel of things

[The Soul Of Philly]

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Latest RP, a little more description into TJ and some trash talky. Also, disregard the broken code, I'm not entirely sure about the editing rules here so I didn't wanna step on any toes.

Just asking what you think of it, I feel I should have done more about the match but after no-showing last week, I wanted to get the match up well before the deadline. Any ideas to improve as I keep getting back into shape with TJ will be great.

[President Jeff]

As for editing rules, I like to give about 10 minutes to fix anything. After that, if its important for it to be fixed, just send me a PM and I can fix it

[Lord Raab]

As a return in favour. I will feedback on your one. Really like the introduction at the beginning and really like the feel of this RP like I have a feeling that your character is going to be like a monster like sort of character a big one at that. The trash talking was really good. Apart from the coding errors but like that's nothing to worry about. To be honest I see no faults in this at all.

[goodburn]

Well, I enjoyed all of it. Like I told you in the chat box, I loved the home town celebration for you. I haven't encountered that before, and it was nice to read. A lot of detail was in it, which made it easy to imagine it as I wsas reading it. Obviously you don't have flowing issues, since it was nice and easy to read.

I was confused about the beginning though. Who were these people that showed up to the event? Why did they show up if they didn't know what was going on? Besides that, it was fantastic.