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Post by Phil Atken on May 29, 2012 9:52:22 GMT -4
HELLO!
So, as some people mayhaps have noticed from the Asylum card, I'm going to be an RP man again who writes them RP things.
However, I did really enjoy doing the Atken's Asylum/Mayhem/Meltdown interview stuff and thought about still continuing them on.
So, just feedback wise.
If you read the segments, did you enjoy them?
Do you think they'll still work?
What would you add/remove/set on fire to the segments in the future?
I would very much appreciate your opinions and I will input them into a giant computer labeled "IDEAMOTRON" which just now seems to be a dot matrix printer that won't stop printing erotic pictures of Margaret Thatcher
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Post by Phil Atken on May 31, 2012 18:52:04 GMT -4
None of you are getting those sexy Thatcher pics  |
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Post by goodburn on Jun 4, 2012 14:14:20 GMT -4
I am tuly heart broken that no one has gotten back with you for some feedback! I will correct this injustice right now!
Oh boy, reading about how much this guy thinks he is sexy... I wont be turned on for some time...
second paragraph, it's something silly to get annoye over, but people really need to learn the differences between to, too, and two. But I do like the point you make about no one in APW being the fan of the boss. It makes Phil look like a brown noser lol.
At this point, I am a bit confused about what the setting is in this roleplay, right now I'm thinking of it as a talk show setting, but I don't know if I am getting the setting correct. But for the rest of the roleplay I'll just picture it as a talk show, hopefully I am correct.
(Finished reading)
Ha, I liked it. It turned out I was right about it being a talk show, since music was playing at the end. The problems were usual, just little typos that most people never notice. It was enjoyable to read, but it would be better if it was polished more, so there wouldn't be anything to annoy me while I'm enjoying the roleplay.
I like the idea, it makes Asylum seem like more of a big deal since it has out cropping APW TV show. Kudos.
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Post by Reaver on Jun 4, 2012 14:32:05 GMT -4
ur too good to get feedback, its all schmexy!!
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Post by Phil Atken on Jun 4, 2012 14:53:35 GMT -4
I am tuly heart broken that no one has gotten back with you for some feedback! I will correct this injustice right now! Oh boy, reading about how much this guy thinks he is sexy... I wont be turned on for some time... second paragraph, it's something silly to get annoye over, but people really need to learn the differences between to, too, and two. But I do like the point you make about no one in APW being the fan of the boss. It makes Phil look like a brown noser lol. At this point, I am a bit confused about what the setting is in this roleplay, right now I'm thinking of it as a talk show setting, but I don't know if I am getting the setting correct. But for the rest of the roleplay I'll just picture it as a talk show, hopefully I am correct. (Finished reading) Ha, I liked it. It turned out I was right about it being a talk show, since music was playing at the end. The problems were usual, just little typos that most people never notice. It was enjoyable to read, but it would be better if it was polished more, so there wouldn't be anything to annoy me while I'm enjoying the roleplay. I like the idea, it makes Asylum seem like more of a big deal since it has out cropping APW TV show. Kudos. Heh, the thread was created for some on-air segment series I was doing for Asylum (with special ones for Mayhem and the Meltdown Supershow) so I didn't want to force anyone to suffer my RP nonsense. Thank you for doing that though, appreciate anyone who puts the time in to doing something like that. |
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