Learning how to serve man......

[Reaver]

apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=iwcrps&action=display&thread=10455

thought id give it a shot at feedback since its few and far between

(i took ur advice on the open office and it was great. thanx callahan)

edit note: i purposely made this 1 more story so i can use the 2nd rp to be more trash talk

[Michael Callahan]

Shit.

That was actually quite good. Far better than your usual stuff and I imagine you'll only improve as you get more practice.

-groan- wtf have I done?

I wish I'd never told you about OpOf. :/

[Jason Cashe]

OpOf? I'm intrigued...What the hell is that? Did you give him a STD? Stop right there, no further info needed...

EDIT: So I don't stray off topic, The CD part of the promo was good. I have always had a love/hate for your writing because you stay true to you and don't change things up too much regardless. However for Asylum, Shoot is a big portion of the promos. I think you'd do better on a show that pushed a mixture of CD and Shoot. So maybe Meltdown? You could always say you've lost that spark and you hit the bottom by getting demoted? Either way, Knuckles is Knuckles and even though he's the Tommy Dreamer of eWrestling, you do you and did it here as well.