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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 10, 2012 15:03:01 GMT -4
apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=houseshow&action=display&thread=10444&page=1I'm referring to the dual promos at above link. I really like these, just read part 2 before typing this up. It has zero to do with an opponent or a match but her own adventure in a School that has mystery all over it. I also liked the dripping water in the bucket, thought that added a nice touch. What I really like about this though is that it fits perfectly to how the House Show should be used. To get an inside on characters almost off camera and this feels like a series of promos that could be a great Adventure to read and I applaud thee. Not usually one to post feedback on someone else's work without them asking for it but I really thought this needed to be said. I look forward to the next installment.
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Post by SalTal on Jun 11, 2012 6:33:10 GMT -4
Why thank-you Kash. I'm glad someone is reading *and* enjoying them.
To elaborate for you - I'm writing them for two rather self-serving reasons. The first, I was not all to happy with the stuff I'd been writing since coming back mainly because (being on Asylum) I had to cut out all my character development stuff to stay competitive. This way, I can write the CD stuff and write my promos separate and sell bounce off them. If you read my two show promos, they will align with what's in these.
The other reason is the I needed to find a bit of 'spark' to get my writing back yo to where it was. Recently, my story lines haven't been as imagination-provoking as I had hoped. So I had to explore a part of the character that hadn't been touched up: The origins of Sally. It was original (for me) to explore how Sally got the nickname 'The Last Magician".
There will be plenty more, trust me. I've got the story roughly planned out in my head as it stands, but none of the details - and that's what's keeping me going with it.
Thanks again! It was nice to get feedback without asking for it - I'm completely terrified of asking for feedback on my promos on here as it stands haha.
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Post by goodburn on Jun 11, 2012 13:14:12 GMT -4
Well, I'm sorry to tell you this, but this is going to be one of those feedbacks where I have nothing but positive things to say about it. I hate those types of feedback  Even though I haven't really followed the Sally character, I can tell by the origin story that Sally is probably a character I would love. I'm going to compare Sally with the Mass Effect series right now. When you play Mass Effect as a women, it's different than all of the other games that feature women. The character doesn't act like a women, but you know she is, because of the way people treat her. I think Sally is the same way, she has her own personality, she isn't a women wrestler trying to be accepted by the men, which most of the women wrestlers do everywhere. That's one reason I really liked it. I mean, "The Happy Endings TV" part is pretty womenish, applying to climax at the end of a massage... But that's an important part, because Sally is Asian, and it's pretty awesome that Sally does that for the fellow wrestlers ;D But yeah, I liked the roleplays too. Pure enjoyment to read. It gets my Badass Seal of Approval  |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jun 11, 2012 13:50:30 GMT -4
She's gonna fuck you up for saying that...Haha!
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Post by Metrodamus on Jun 11, 2012 20:02:20 GMT -4
What?
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Post by goodburn on Jun 12, 2012 0:26:43 GMT -4
There is no way I am explaining that any further. |
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Post by SalTal on Jun 12, 2012 2:27:27 GMT -4
More confusing than a Captain Clapton promo. I'm pretty sure that you're referencing my character being Asian - as opposed to me. You're alluding to the irony of the name 'Happy Ending' and the fact that the opponent doesn't really get one, yes? Aside from that haha, thank-you for the comments! I now feel I have an idea about what Mass Effect if ... actually, no, I still have no clue. But I liked that you picked up on the differences I've tried to get into the Sally character over time to other female characters. |
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Post by President Jeff on Jun 13, 2012 19:52:42 GMT -4
More confusing than a Captain Clapton promo. IT IS WHAT IT IS |
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