Meltdown 6/11 Feedback

[Johnny Rebel]

Sorry for the delay everyone. Horrible day at the office and I rushed home as quick as possible to make sure the card went up at a decent hour.

Thanks to Jason Kash and Evan Envi for writing matches this week. Envi really came through and saved my rear with an additional match.

Thanks to Evan Envi, Yarmouth, and Michael Lively for writing segments.

Also a big thanks to Jason Kash for stepping up on Meltdown this week! It's been pretty sweet to see some of the established APW megastars step in and raise the profile of our third brand.

As always -- feedback is welcome.

[Jason Cashe]

That Carmen chick is just mean..

[Your JESUS]

Great show, thouroughly entertained the entire time. The main event was cool loved the suprise partner gimmick with star power, the end of show was dope...although I'm sure Michael Lively threw up in his locker after witnessing a woman go over. Great show guys, so glad to be back and just hope I can add to the entertainment value here. Honestly I hope I can still hang, we will see next week I guess.

[Evan De Parker]

Jun 11, 2012 23:03:25 GMT -4 Jason Cashe said:

That Carmen chick is just mean..

Right?

I love that the Rivera character was given that badass edge that she needed to cement herself as a top player on Meltdown... It's always nice to see something different at the end of the show, and it makes me excited for the inevitable showdown.

The whole main-event was very well written. Evan didn't get as much in-ring time as I'd have liked, but given that he's been hogging the program for a while, I think it was a nice change of pace.

Kudos to Shadow for a good RP and looking like a boss throughout much of that matchup. Everybody contributed a different element to this match.

As always, nice to see a bigger name (The World Heavyweight frickin' champ, y'all) on Meltdown. It adds a huge feeling of importance to the show and in this case, was a power play on Diamond's part.

I'd also like to mention that I've got a man-chub for the Kyle Goodburn character, and demand that we see more Goodburn segments on Meltdown ASAP.

Thanks to Stryker and Yarmouth for kickass RPs that motivated me to write a match that showcased both of them. And also, a huge thanks to J-Hop (another intriguing character), Anselm, TJ, and especially Raab for kickass RPs that made the tag match fun to write as well.

And as always, Horrowitz and Wolves keep me wanting more. I hope both of you guys get the free time to produce the five-star quality RPs we've seen before, because the more Horrowitz is pushed toward a face turn and the more frustrated Wolves gets, the more interested I become. I'd really like to see Dita more involved in this too. But that's just me speaking as a reader... A "fan" if you will.

Lastly, Lively's promo really caught my attention. It's definitely not something I expected and easily made me hate the Lively character. But in a good way. In a Heel way. Take notes, everybody.

Solid show. I dug it.

[Lord Raab]

I am glad you enjoyed the RP Evan as that was quite a hard and emotional RP I have ever written in my life. Didn't even expect this outcome at all on me and J Hop winning the match at all. Nice write up to the results too.

[goodburn]

I would like to announce that tonight, I actually started writing a segment for Meltdown. I would like to also announce that Kyle Goodburn is in the type of mood where Everyone is on his shit list, so everyone will be attacked on his segment.

Especially Evan Envi, and Michael Lively

But to the Meltdown show. I think this one is my favorite from all four I have read. Just nothing but action packed wrestling (No pun intended) I think it's probably due to the PPV that is coming up, which usually pumps everybody up, and it makes them bring their A Game, to assure that they are in a good match for the PPV. Kudos to everybody, and thank you Jason Kash for appearing this week on Meltdown, it was pretty awesome seeing such a big star on our show.

Or as Kyle Goodburn would say, His show, not Evan Envi's... lol

[Evan De Parker]

Totally Envi's show.

[yarmouth1]

That was one kick ass show, Evan well done on my match top draw, your turning out to be a really good writer for the show i write matches for a different fed and know how hard it can be to get it just right and think you did just about right.

Wolves and Horrowitz was another cracking match, these two are really getting a decent feud going and can't wait to see the final out come and who wins the match lol

Thanks to Kash, Yeah you know that guy who has some sort of title lol, Nice to see one of the top guys coming on this show and giving it a huge boost not that it needed it any way.

The main event was just awesome, I can Carmen dethroning our champion Envi as she has done some awesome Role Plays these past few weeks and I bet that Kash is a bit sore morning lol.

And all so some great segments guys, the Meltdown show was just awesome as per.

Well done MR Rebel

[The Hitman]

Another great Meltdown. Sorry I couldn't help out more this week. Once the card comes out this week I'll sign up to take a match and I'll definitely write a segment.

I did notice the matches were much longer this week, which isn't a bad thing, just a note.

Might've taken until day of but there were a lot of RP's this week and that's always what you want to see.

Good job to Yarmouth for giving me a run for my money this week.

Being able to RP against you gave my character a lot of building that he needed. Making the plunge into my character being a full fledged heel has been fun.

[Jason Cashe]

I wanted to give a more indepth review but had to leave after seeing the show. I reread a good portion of what I skimmed yesterday so now I can give a review properly.

The intro segment worked out beautifully. I expected it to be backstage and it was in the ring. I felt like Kash was appreciated and that's dope and the nice words you guys have given on this is even sweeter, thanks. I wanted to appear on Meltdown because of how it's impressed me. I think a bigger name even bigger than myself should help promote the new brand and the excellent talent coming from this show. Evan Envi is just a stellar talent and I see big things from him.

I TRULY hope I did better with this round of Wolves and Horrowitz but truth be told I kept spelling Horrowitz as "Horrowtiz" and had to go back and edit parts I did that too. Funny and small but true. I just hope it's more liked than the first and does them both justice.

The Yarmouth segment was cool but one thing stood out to me. He said if dude comes anywhere near the ring he'd get more than a Tombstone or a Piledriver. I know there are various ways to the move but it's too common really to list one after another but that's just me. I think the new direction of Yarmouth adds a depth of character to the character and he'll improve greatly with time. Kudos to Yarmouth!

I keep thinking of Stefan as a female. It's because the handler is female and for some reason it's just not clicking to me. The Tag Match was cool though, I liked the Elbow Drop to the back of the neck, good spot. I like original spots like that and look for them when reading and got it here so I was happy with the overall match. Congrats to the victors, I was surprised to see who won because I think most seen it going another way so good job taking that match for yourselves.

Again, Envi is some kind of a dick that needs a beating. That sounds a bit odd but the statement rests as true. He owns this show right now, he has every tool to have coming into a Fed and will have a grand old time in APW. He works with people, good dude OOC..Not so much In Character though. I can see him and Callahan being Kash's most hated rivals eventually.

Michael Lively on Meltdown? To say it's exciting is not big enough of an emotion for anyone who has even heard of the character. He will be a straight away contender and if Envi and Lively get together expect some AMAZING fireworks. I can see the back and forth, the who's better, who's got more to prove and earn and it will be a classic if that does take place down the road. Title on the line or not. Lively's Veteran Shitting Segment was Classic! He said things that I've always felt inside and they made me smile, laugh and look at him for more humor and entertainment so this HoFer should not, will not fail to deliver after this show. EXPECT more cause I do.

Rivera in the Main Event surprised me. I didn't expect that but by lordly Hey-Zeus I loved it! Kash probably thought he was gonna get donut holed inside the ring so he expected that like he expects a 100 virgins upon death and he doesn't expect that at all. The match itself was cool but the brawling outside the ring, then at the entrance sort of took away the eyes from the match itself. I could almost envision turning my head to the entrance and only seeing the match from my side view. So it felt real, felt live and I cannot say a single thing about it negatively so big Props, I had fun, loved being apart of this show and hope things continue to ride hard for the Baby Brother Show of APW.

[Your JESUS]

Very kind words Kash, thank you very much.

[Lord Raab]

Trust me Kash. I have tried playing another female character asides from Fizz and for some reason I couldn't make things work at all with it. The gimmick and the character I done just wasn't there for me. I am better with male wrestlers than females ones. Thanks for your feedback on the character though.

[Carmen Rivera]

Jun 11, 2012 23:03:25 GMT -4 Jason Cashe said:

That Carmen chick is just mean..

<3 really. C=

[Evan De Parker]

SHE'S A HOE!

lol

Thank you much for the kind words, Mr. Kash. Pleasure working with you, and I hope we get to work with each other again directly in the near future.

[yarmouth1]

Thanks for the kind words Kash, I'm really enjoying my time here in APW.