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Post by Johnny Rebel on Jul 30, 2012 22:18:48 GMT -4
Thanks to Shadow/Craven, Michael Lively, Yarmouth and Envi for writing matches.
Also thanks to Young Mannie, Lively, Raab, Borderland, Yarmouth and Kash for writing segments.
Feedback, as always, is welcome.
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Post by Jayden "Ice Storm" Carmichael on Jul 30, 2012 22:26:08 GMT -4
I have to say, those results were awesome! I can not wait for Meltdown to be a part of it!
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Post by Shane Borderland on Jul 30, 2012 22:27:25 GMT -4
Great Show Reb. you guys always amaze me, Keep up the good work, Alot of good matches and segments. Loved them all. Now Kash coming in like that, really threw me for a loop. Did not see that coming. But anyways great job by everyone!
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Post by Shadow on Jul 30, 2012 22:29:57 GMT -4
First, to whomever wrote the Lively/Raab match, please do not use that numeric break structure again. It distracted from the match because there were so many and the gaps nwere huge. Please limit the distance between counts in the future, Thank you.
Next, excellent roleplays this week from everyone who showed. The matches personified your efforts, putting on a damn good show.
Win for the Rookies Good to see them stepping up.
Borderland and Yarmouth are both excellent new stars. They got a bright future ahead of both of them.
Main Event was well written with several good turns. It is interesting to see what Carmen's reign will be like. She continues to impress every week. Not bad to look at either.
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Post by John Combe on Jul 30, 2012 22:30:52 GMT -4
Sweet results man!
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Post by Jason Cashe on Jul 31, 2012 1:04:35 GMT -4
One issue. The part where Kash comes out and attacks Yarmouth and then Diamond announces the Main Event for next week. That kind of takes place or is written to take place AFTER the Yarmouth/Borderland match. Borderland is standing outside the ring, leaning against the apron. Yarmouth already in the ring leaning against the ropes. Before their respective entrances? Just placement. The show was great, I like how Borderland was involved earlier to play on our history. Very Booker T moment there, "Tell Me I didn't see that..." feeling.
Lively losing was a surprise but congrats to Raab in a match that was FAR too long in the spacing parts. Nice segments, strong showing from Meltdown. Losing Envi could have hurt a bit but the talent holds it's own and I am grateful to be allowed to help promote this new Show that has so much promise. Props to Rebel for being a stud in doing this thus far as well.
I also want to give a rare shout out to Young Mannie. Big props for the rp written for this match against the NA Champ. Gotta love how you stepped up from Frank Cannon to something more what people remember from RSM and held it down. Good showing. Think of this loss like you've taken the Silver medal. Not a loss but a show that improve is being worked on and things are looking up. Keeping trotting.
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Post by President Jeff on Jul 31, 2012 9:18:34 GMT -4
Remember peeps, Matches are summerized except for the Main Event. We can't have the middle match on the show look better than the main event
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Post by The Main Attraction on Jul 31, 2012 10:47:43 GMT -4
I also want to give a rare shout out to Young Mannie. Big props for the rp written for this match against the NA Champ. Gotta love how you stepped up from Frank Cannon to something more what people remember from RSM and held it down. Good showing. Think of this loss like you've taken the Silver medal. Not a loss but a show that improve is being worked on and things are looking up. Keeping trotting. If I can get a shoutout and some respect from Kash, and we all know how Kash likes to rip me than I think I can get through anything and I will keep on trucking. Thanks brah...I won't disappoint. I think it's also time to step my rp style & not to say change it but who knows maybe. |
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Post by Lord Raab on Jul 31, 2012 11:04:50 GMT -4
I thought Shadow losing to Dante was a surprise as well as I thought Shadow had the match won.
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Post by Jules on Jul 31, 2012 11:52:15 GMT -4
First, to whomever wrote the Lively/Raab match, please do not use that numeric break structure again. It distracted from the match because there were so many and the gaps nwere huge. Please limit the distance between counts in the future, Thank you. I agree. It was beyond annoying, and completely unnecessary. It did the opposite of creating tension, and if it was some kind of ironic statement it was a pretty lame one. Other than that what I read was pretty good stuff. Glad to see that the Meltdown are carrying the torch Evan Envi lit with pride and in their own way. |
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Post by Evan De Parker on Jul 31, 2012 12:16:49 GMT -4
Remember peeps, Matches are summerized except for the Main Event. We can't have the middle match on the show look better than the main event But it happens in real life all the time! |
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Post by President Jeff on Jul 31, 2012 12:19:21 GMT -4
True, but its not fair that the other 3 matches are summerized
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Post by The Main Attraction on Jul 31, 2012 12:29:43 GMT -4
Remember peeps, Matches are summerized except for the Main Event. We can't have the middle match on the show look better than the main event But it happens in real life all the time! Btw dude awesome job on the mainevent, It had me on the edge of my seat. |
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Post by Your JESUS on Jul 31, 2012 13:28:34 GMT -4
My bad on the match, I think we only need three more people to trash it and we have the whole roster showing their disapproval! Been awhile since I wrote a match, a lot different then before.
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Post by President Jeff on Jul 31, 2012 14:05:28 GMT -4
Less is more Lively  I still appreciate you writing the match though |
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Post by Your JESUS on Jul 31, 2012 14:14:01 GMT -4
I know, just fucking around, but G.I. Joe taught me knowing is half the battle and now I know!!! Haha...from the 80's!!!
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Post by yarmouth1 on Jul 31, 2012 14:51:35 GMT -4
Great show as per and yes the format for the 1,2,3 that was done in the alphabet mode did put me off a little but the match in it's self was well written and as Kash said the but we're he comes over the barricade needed to be at the end of the match could have been written in the match but apart from that cracking show even though I did get my butt kicked lol.
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