Jackpot feedback

[A.C. Smith]

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I usually don't do RP's that are this dialogue-heavy. That said, I wanted to change things up a little. I got rolling last night, and what transpired was...that. It's a bit out of my element, and I'm curious to see what others think of it. Any feedback would be much appreciated.

Thanks!

[Lord Raab]

I liked that there was a lot of character development in this RP but my main issue with this RP personally is that there wasn't really much about the match that your character was in. I always make sure that my character talks more about the match than having the character development stuff in there although it makes RP's a lot better with them in there but you are a wrestler always remember that dude. It's a good story layout with your character's history with his family and everything.