Pat Stay
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Post by Pat Stay on Sept 2, 2012 20:03:37 GMT -4
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Post by yarmouth1 on Sept 3, 2012 10:37:29 GMT -4
First off it was a good get to know you Role play but for me there was more explanation of the surroundings then there was trash talking, remember on Meltdown you have 3000 words to work from.
There was too much description of the gym and not enough trash talking, Try and minimise the surroundings a little no need to explain every think that's in the gym, When the young boy comes over to you explain more on what your going to do to Dante I always say the more trash talk the better chance you have of getting the win.
But apart from that it was a good Role play just more trash talking.
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