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Post by Johnny Rebel on Sept 24, 2012 21:53:05 GMT -4
Another Meltdown is in the books.
Thanks to Envi and Lively for writing matches this week. I ended up writing 3 matches this afternoon and tried to do them justice but real life gets in the way sometimes.
Points to Envi, Pennington, Krunk, Lively, M&M (Aubrey Parker/Logan Alexander), Kash, and Educated Money with segments.
As always, feedback is welcome.
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Post by Vincent Pennington on Sept 24, 2012 22:58:39 GMT -4
It was a good show man and if I was going to grab some matches, but I saw it was all covered...
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shanell
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Post by shanell on Sept 25, 2012 2:09:32 GMT -4
I really enjoyed reading the show.
It was my first one, so I was super excited. As far as my dark match, it was good. Its a dark match so I wasn't expecting it to be super long or anything. Excited for the next time I'm on the show.
For the rest of the show, it was very well written. I enjoyed it. And, I'm excited to learn more about the storylines going on, the wrestlers, and getting more in the mix of things. Great show guys!
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 25, 2012 15:31:24 GMT -4
Okay, I'll be the one who goes into detail for feedback. Well as detailed as I can be right now. I'm TOKED the fuck out. Bare with me.
The dark match was what it was. I hope to see more from both Noir and Shanell because I think both can grow into something good for any roster in APW. Dangerous had some bad luck, YOU MY BOY Dang!
Lively and Storm's little interview was typical. Very Lively though which is without a glass ceiling but this was nice enough. He made the situation with Bartlett into something for him to play off of and that makes perfect sense.
Mannie doing his thing. Good to see, I see big things for Comikaze as a Tag Team so I hope Crow doesn't take this as a bad thing. Chin up, get right and we'll see the new Tag Division really rise. Can't win them all but make it entertaining and the level of fun you'll have will be without limits. Trust me.
Krunk getting himself involved, smashing Sabur even who is a former Undisputed Champion. Says something about Krunk. I like the guy, the character and I'm glad to say I've given him a few pointers and they seem to be sinking in and being used. Big props to dude.
I really liked M&M's segment. Part because AJP was in it and "SHA-WING" but also because Kash and OV was mentioned and that's love. It's promotion and I will return the favor this next Meltdown show.
AJP gets a easy win. I thought we didn't show matches of people fired or flaked? Guess an example was made and surely it was just. Again AJP "SHA-WING"!
Vincent Pennington's segment was probably my real first glance at him. It's hard to see Vin Diesel and not think of the so many years I used him as Kash. I'm greatful I no longer use him and will be giving Vincent a deeper look after seeing this segment. It sold himself, his anger for Envi and Lively. Seems like a strong willed character. AND he picked up an easy victory this show. He's got everything going for him.
Educated Money arriving to the building. A Classic approach to an old intro. I like these two, the french is a little annoying. Maybe have a (translation) for us one language that's not French speaking folks. Outside of that small thing, I liked this. Maybe could have used some color coding. New so they'll get around to learning the ropes as will all of our new signings. Don't get discouraged when feedback is given. Helping the next man or woman grow means this place stays tough and competitive. We want your success because it makes every match, every opponent fun to compete against and write with. Nice intro for Educated Money.
Easy win for Streets. Did Ace even show up? Still it's good to see an APW Vet returning and doing well. Someone I can see writing against down the road.
Ryan Collins is another guy I really haven't gotten to know yet. The match with Tek was a bit long. After reading the long ass segment before though, it wasn't too bad. Haha. "The Instant Classic" is a bit used but I'll have to see the character more and maybe a Classic is what you really are.
I hope Educated Money liked the segment I did with them. They wrote the first part involving them and then I got it sent to me on Sunday. I finished Monday morning and sent it to Rebel and didn't get a chance to send it back for review on your part. My bad and I hope I did it justice.
The Main Event was brilliantly written. I was edge of my seat. I was pulling for Krunk because I've had so many talks with him but Shadow came through and wasn't disappointing. A very good match for ONIH for Meltdown and I hope "Jesus" doesn't get crucified during this Title defense.
I give this show
4 out of 5 *
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