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Post by Donald Deruty on Nov 9, 2012 1:44:00 GMT -4
Hello, i just posted my RP for the first round of the tag team tournament and i thought i would try and get an oppinion from anyone. Criticism is taken as a way to improve, i will in no way take it from a wrong angle or personal. Please if there is anything you would like me to improve on or think i should improve on reply here. All feedback is appreciated! RP----> apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=meltdownrp&action=display&thread=12850&page=1 |
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Post by Mark Mania on Nov 9, 2012 10:16:01 GMT -4
Get rid of the blue font. I'll give you more feedback after. But good god that makes it tough to read.
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Post by Donald Deruty on Nov 18, 2012 17:27:33 GMT -4
Alright everyone, i changed the color coding a little. Let me know what you think of my RP. I tried to tie it in with gambling, please tell me if it was a success of bust. I did something similar to what i did this week only it was a different occurance, and unfortunately it must have not been as liked as i wished it was. So please give your feedback, anything is appreciated!
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Post by Donald Deruty on Dec 21, 2012 2:12:15 GMT -4
Alright, with this week being a huge week for me considering a singles title match, tag title match, and school finals. I would like to ask for any feedback on either of my posted RPs. My third should be up tomorrow night. Once again any feedback is appreciated!
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