Any chance of feedback please?

[yarmouth1]

apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=iwcrps&action=display&thread=12842

I went for some think a little different to what I normally do going with the under dog feel.

With it been such an important match I thought that Yarmouth is the Underdog in this one but I did enjoy it writing it very much.

Cheers Yar.

[Lord Raab]

I can say that you have really improved a lot since your last One Night In Hell RP that you did but there were a few things that I didn't like there are still a few spelling mistakes and that it was an RP full of Stefan and not that much towards the Heavyweight title match which always and should come first in a RP before talking and hyping up the feud.

I did however like the fact that you wrote about how your character tried to bail Stefan out of his suspension and Jeff just refused to do that. Keep the good work coming dude but try to work less about Stefan and focus more on the match in hand.