i guess its my turn to give my run down....
the opening seg SUCKED BALLS!! oh wait, ITS MINE! (still sucks
) i was told originally by biggs to change my seg for later in the show, so i did but i guess biggs said fuck it anyways. (i knew he cursed!) im not trying to take anything away from anybody and i wanna make that perfectly clear. dont blame biggs tho he busted ass to do his thing and i hope u guys like where im taking this
the point its trying to make is to (incase u havnt gotten the point yet) alienate Knuckles. he comes out thinking hes the fan favorite only to be ignored (hits close to home) and thats y everything ive been doing has been taking place. u will see where it takes him soon, but its the start of something nice story wise. hopefully shane reads it and gets a nice chuckle that i had it at his expense
from this we move onto Kash's seg where he took MY belt and ends up putting a curse on it? you fucker!! ill make u thinner like stephen king. lol good times.
this is here the show REALLY starts
. the four pillars show up loud and proud awaiting the answer from TJ.
-wait-
yarmouth "fella" t-shirts got jacked? WTF? lol
back to ring side with the four pillars. i like the concept that these guys came together and gave TJ a chance. saint is always a favorite and strikes rp was AWESOME! but sally too? aww shit. i think TJ really needed this to push his character beyond where he already is. (not that he isnt good as is) but the combined expertise of sally, strike and saint will only do great things. i have to agree tho with atken in the sense that it almost feel slightly "heel-ish" at least to me cuz when i read sally's context, i get the sense that shes the queen of england over her balcony, if that makes any sense. i think their "face value" is taken away by a lack of a heel group to protect or improve asylum from. i mean, where would any hero be with out their villain? if L-O had his group of free agents here THEN sally formed four pillars, it might make more sense to me. maybe if Reginald were the heel or villain in all this it would be better. again, im not putting it down, i just think they need more to fight for as a team. the segment itself is nicely written (hard for it to suck when everybody in APW is good at writing matches, segs, and rps)
b4 i move on tho, i think theres more that nobody else here has noticed. Strike and Saint both r really new to Asylum and even Sally has only been here for a yr (shes usually on OD) but TJ has been here for quite some time and with TJ needing the exp from the other 3, they need his asylum credibility and i think that makes for a fair exchange for the group so im glad he said yes.
now we have Kash vs Atken and Sally is the ref. there is NO WAY that Atken will get away with cheating on HER watch. very entertaining to watch but its a shame that Atken was just busy to post a second rp. now that his confidence is back, i seriously think that Sally will have a tough time at CC. grats to Atken, the 1 rp he did post was excellent.
the slow and steady feud with Raab and Yarmouth is starting to come to an end and wat better way then to go out with a bang?
blowing up t-shirts tho? almost a waste of C4 but hey, we cant all be driving 6 figure vehicles while theres cement mixers standing conveniently near by lol. just work on writing those sentences properly and i think ull have it down. im pretty sure Sally mentioned it in a feedback thread somewhere rite? i like to see things go boom so gj. also noticed the word BITCH used alot. call him a cum dumpster, call him a bloody wanker? call him an ass ramming uncle fucker or something cmon
. and since u took "Johnny Knuckles to his limits" only to lose to a single chair shot lol i guess the rest can slide
<3
and if it isnt Lando Calrissian, i mean WDWs:) diggin the quick shoot on Yarmouth. could be a future contender.
Yarmouth on a highwire dressed as superman? i think maybe a scene from the celebrity roast of flavor flav might have been better but hey, its all good. lol. shoot was kool and more importantly, its hype for CC which is always appreciated. shame ya tapped out "fella". good debut for WDW but a shame for Yarmouth who could have used that much needed momentum for CC.
Hart on Asylum? and Callahan is blocking his way? this could get ugly and it looks great. the plot thickens as this push for Noble/Hart continues. certainly a match and set of rp's i will do my best to read. (time prohibited) almost seem slightly out of place for Callahan to be a paid guard for anybody much less Noble.but then again i like it since Knuckles is a hired gun himself. perhaps Gi could have done it? anyways it was nicely done and i cant wait for more
TJ attacks Hart for Noble? im confused....Tj is face and isnt Noble heel? not to mention more stuff ill mention later on.
this is where Atken tries to recruit Kash but somehow stubbs his toe talking on the phone. and IM the idiot?
lol i guess Atken has the same agenda in mind as Sally. perhaps the villain is closer than i originally thought?
nice to see an AJP seg, maybe she should have dressed up the otter like i told her originally and maybe she could have gotten a nice meal lol. thanx AJP
Bailey and AJP? isnt he taken? lol HE"S MINE!! jk.....i swear.......DONT JUDGE MY LIFESTYLE!! see u at CC? sounds interesting. cant wait for that.
another Callahan segment? damn it. he didnt pay me the $20 from the last 1. im coming to collect fucker lol. always a pleasure to read these. yes i do read.....seriously i do......
y do u always judge me? his shoot on the dying breed is nothing less than awesome. he portrays that asshole inside and out of the politician status and it works. not to mention his silence sold it all. WTG!
love the quip about fudging off to the food network during the Raab/Slade match. maybe its cuz im the chocolate man
anyways, not to much luck in the art of hardcore r ya Raab? a quick nut shot and drop down holding his jingle bells, Slade FTW, grats. i think this would have been a good time to hype their feud more rather than ending either of their matches clean. not they Slade and WDW didnt deserve to win, just would have been more hype for them.
i spoke too soon, and LET THE BRAWL BEGIN!! did slade just heel turn? nice shot with the chair. time to assert his dominance.
now we have Callahan being recruited. this is wat confused me a lil since he helped take down Hart with TJ and Noble. i guess it makes sense cuz Callahan didnt have any problems with TJ at the time and now that he is getting recruited, fireworks will fly. i totally can see these 2 as leaders. i have to totally agree with the reasoning behind Atken's recruitment. (in character) how he puts it is if THEY r the heels and trying to take away that doesnt belong to them. should be interesting.
its very nice to see TJ and Saint interacting here. its starting to build to something bigger and thats always appreciated. more importantly, its building to CC in which they both realize they too r opponent as well as team mates. its possible to see these two left standing, aside from the fact that Jules has been uber busy lately. this seg was definitely needed. well done.
i LOVE how this match took place but i didnt realize that u couldnt leave the ring for this title or type of match. ive never seen it in past shows b4, i miss something? on that same note, i dont think it could have been done better tho. then the coinflip giving TJ the last man in the CC match. excellent job hyping this up. another match im looking forward to.
is it me or is dressing as Santa slightly over done? nice to see a DB seg, i think they need more air time. HA i love how Bailey is forced to wait while Reginald is on the phone. SUSPENSE!! i hope it lasts.....
i wanna clarify things a lil for Atken about this seg with me and Goeren. first off my tip of the hat to him for pushing this. much appreciated sir. it all started back at S&C last yr when Knuckles made it to the final four and the steel cage dropped down. Goeren and Noble managed to make it out and Alioth Starre had Knuckles ankle and snapped it keeping him from walking. Knuckles managed to get up usingn the ropes while Starre held on and Knuckles managed to slap him with a Broken Promise putting Starre out cold. Knuckles slowly climbed the cage and made it to the top while Starre was STILL out cold only to have Goeren climb up from the outside and attack Knuckles, keeping him from escaping. Noble tried to help but Starre managed to climb up and out from the other side, thus eliminating Knuckles from S&C. this is the beef they have
Knuckles felt that if Goeren wasnt there to stop him from climbing out, that he might have won the whole thing. we did a segment on OD where the first met since S&C as well and now Goeren is just taunting Knuckles in all the right places. Knuckles is starting to slowly lose his sanity and Goeren is merely pushing it along. ud have to wait and see where it goes next
again, i appreciate the push of the identity theft story bro
Now Atken is trying to recruit Knuckles. surprised anybody is still talking to him after this whole identity thing
. again, i loved how he put things into perspective to further his own agenda. typical Atken style and its great. i did think it was hilarious that he asked me to follow him into the bathroom. its not like this was an airport or anything so i said ya sure
(see politics) then a fight almost insues. way to go Phil......
the tag match was GREAT. back and forth and wat a way to set u for later. i like where this GI thing is going. might be worth pursuing, just sayin.....3 tap outs in 1 Asylum? i am shocked and apauled....not really:p tough win for Callahan, well earned. again, i think DB needs more air time. so much for that, Callahan just took them out with that signed bat. not worth a fuck now is it? try selling THAT on ebay. his mentality with the whole situation and frustration comes out well here. its also nice to see that the "anti hardcore" is erased and replaced with serious violence. good flip lol
Kash attacking Strike? doesnt surprise me. well written, just wish Strike wasnt as busy to join in more. i heard he does amazing work and i feel left out :/ this totally hypes it that much more and to see that Strike wanted to get at Kash in the worst way made it. not to mention its always nice to see Kash laid out LOL
aww crap my match....i wanna apologize to Bailey who wrote this. he did a a great job selling all of it but i didnt give him the heads up that Kash was gonna win the title from me earlier in the nite meaning i wouldnt have the title with me. that was my fault. regardless, the story was sold. i just wish Strike was able to post a second but no hard feelings. he should be making it up to me at CC when he brings it full force
i also wanna say how much i loved the rp he did post. killer job.
HA HA, Sally/Hart seg. love the interaction here but again im confused since it was TJ that attacked him for Noble and he is on Sallys side. it makes me wonder if itll play a role in this whole situation.
suspicious AJP, cant really blame her. well done on this and it sold properly.
this to me is the MOTN hands down. kudos to Envi for making this match kick so much ass. Sallys hesitation sells this to me. she knows she has an uphill battle here regardless of wat happens. reading this match really makes u feel like ur watching it live AND u can feel the tension all around. AJP's and Sally's suspicion towards Atken shows clearly. it starts off slow and begins to build which is wat helps sent the tone for things. NOW Atken is starting to get some digs in by letting Sally take some punishment without the rope break. this goes back and forth and again Envi did a phenominal job writing this match. the best part was the end where they reverse the make under and make over then both kick out. wow. i can totally see this happening again at some point in the future. gotta love these matches HA. AJP blocked the happy ending? who doesnt love a good happy ending? and on a chick no less:p jk Sally. MAKE UNDER!! 1, 2, 3-ish......DQ? GREAT ENDING. love controversy and it fits Atken well in this. WHAT A TWIST! and now things get ugly as they both hate on poor Phil
Just when you think its over, Atken gets help from Callahan who takes out AJP and things get ugly. and now the BRAWL baby! HA knuckles and Kash going at it still kicks ass.
i give this show a solid 8. always room for improvement but the hype for CC is extremely evident and im excited. great job everybody.
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Still, again, I just have to commend Evan here, really, really strong match that done both handlers justice and produces the potential for some interesting interactions down the line. 
) i was told originally by biggs to change my seg for later in the show, so i did but i guess biggs said fuck it anyways. (i knew he cursed!) im not trying to take anything away from anybody and i wanna make that perfectly clear. dont blame biggs tho he busted ass to do his thing and i hope u guys like where im taking this 
y do u always judge me? his shoot on the dying breed is nothing less than awesome. he portrays that asshole inside and out of the politician status and it works. not to mention his silence sold it all. WTG! 
