The Paragon of Hardcore
Semi-Main Eventer
Already The IWC Insane Champion... Serioulsy, you people need to catch up...
Posts: 526
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Post by The Paragon of Hardcore on Sept 11, 2008 0:01:18 GMT -4
So I posted my Return Roleplay. I feel a bit rusty... I'd love some feedback... Don't worry... I'll do much better at Overdrive when I have something like Trevor's disgust with John Green to work off of... I never was all that great at debut roleplays... But still, I'd like some feedback from my esteemed colleagues.
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The Paragon of Hardcore
Semi-Main Eventer
Already The IWC Insane Champion... Serioulsy, you people need to catch up...
Posts: 526
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Post by The Paragon of Hardcore on Sept 13, 2008 16:50:29 GMT -4
Y'know... you guys are lame... NO ONE could give me ANY feedback on my first roleplay in two months??? Its not like I'm some jobber like John Green... I have friends here... Did it suck that bad and no one wanted to give me constructive criticism? Or was it really good and no one wanted to make my head any bigger then it already is?
Look... I left feedback on Spirit's board...
Its not even like no one noticed that I made this thread... it says 15 people viewed it...
You people suck...
Yeah...
I need a cigarette...
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Post by President Jeff on Sept 13, 2008 17:05:41 GMT -4
for a redebut it was good, but I don't like giving feedback on a non match RP because debut RP is just a grain of salt of what your capable of, IMO. A match RP really shows what you can do.
and PS, I didn't notice this thread until you bumped it up
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Post by hxcprincess on Sept 13, 2008 17:05:52 GMT -4
YOur post was hot! Kristina is hot! You are hot! Let's have a sex party, with all of APW! Sexy party!
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Post by President Jeff on Sept 13, 2008 17:07:24 GMT -4
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"The Hottest Shit Going"
Semi-Main Eventer
Lights out, thats all she wrote, cancel Christmas, the kitchen is closed!!!
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Post by "The Hottest Shit Going" on Sept 13, 2008 17:42:53 GMT -4
SEX PARTY!!!!!
Trevor your shit was on point as usual. Glad your back my friend.
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fyreangel
Jobber
sinfully dangerous
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Post by fyreangel on Sept 13, 2008 18:02:55 GMT -4
I SOO FUCKING MISSED YOU!!! LOL sorry couldnt resist lol I love the return r/p
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The Paragon of Hardcore
Semi-Main Eventer
Already The IWC Insane Champion... Serioulsy, you people need to catch up...
Posts: 526
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Post by The Paragon of Hardcore on Sept 13, 2008 18:14:24 GMT -4
*blushes a bit*
There.
That's better.
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Post by Arcadia on Sept 13, 2008 18:30:29 GMT -4
Ok, so not only did I have to watch you write it, hear you read it, and proof read it with you, now you want me to give you feedback??
G-d, you not even THIS demanding in bed!!
I thought it was great, though. I like that Trevor is a hasbeen enough to be doing a signing at a WALMART.
I love you.
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Post by President Jeff on Sept 13, 2008 19:25:29 GMT -4
Having Trevor doing a guest signing at a Walmart reminded me of when Rick Steiner did a signing at my local walmart a few months back
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