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Post by Adrien Specter on Jan 10, 2013 14:25:55 GMT -4
If you can spare a few words, please feel free. Thank you  |
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Post by Reaver on Jan 10, 2013 14:41:50 GMT -4
gladly, maybe a link?  |
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Post by Adrien Specter on Jan 10, 2013 15:02:25 GMT -4
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Post by Reaver on Jan 12, 2013 2:21:18 GMT -4
i find it quite fascinating how u piece this together. he has no tongue, if i remember correctly, so instead of talking trash he writes letters. aside from a few spelling errors, i think it pushes who specter is inside as well as outside the ring. he has a deep character with a slight touch of humanity begging to be recognized (if that makes sense). what gets me most about this is how its sold. u sell briefly how u no Noble as to give a slight backstory without taking away from the match itself which in turn, sells it as a whole. i did, however, find a few things getting repetitive. the use of he word YOU over n over in a small patch then not used again for a while. as far as the rp itself, i think its done well to sell the current situation leading into S&C but the only negatives about it r grammar. (talk about the pot calling the kettle black ) aside from that it was damn good. 7/10 always room for improvement |
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Post by Adrien Specter on Jan 25, 2013 15:46:19 GMT -4
Just thought I'd bump this for my Survive and Conquer RP. And to save you the effort of trolling through the thread to find it, I've helpfully put it over in SCW, and gave it a name. So, on that note, please enjoy "Specter: Portrait of a Monster" z15.invisionfree.com/SCWforums/index.php?showtopic=7804 |
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