Feedback for the future

"The Future Is Here"

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Feedback for the future Jan 21, 2013 3:02:15 GMT -4

Post by Anthony "Future" Washington on Jan 21, 2013 3:02:15 GMT -4

Hey guys I would sure love some feedback for my RP. I like to look at this piece as getting back into the groove of things for I have been away from rp'ing for awhile and may have lost some steps. builded up for things to run smoovely in the Future (haha get it, future ;D ) Anyways I would really appreciate some feedbacks to let me know how i'm doing.

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Thanks

Jules Legend Alive and kicking Posts: 2,093	Feedback for the future Jan 21, 2013 8:36:00 GMT -4 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jules on Jan 21, 2013 8:36:00 GMT -4 You really need to change the colour you're using. I can't read it.
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Eric Steel Manager Posts: 52	Feedback for the future Jan 21, 2013 10:35:11 GMT -4 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eric Steel on Jan 21, 2013 10:35:11 GMT -4 The color is a little bit much. But I did get the point you were trying to make. So its all good.

Anthony "Future" Washington Door man "The Future Is Here" Posts: 18	Feedback for the future Jan 21, 2013 12:00:22 GMT -4 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Anthony "Future" Washington on Jan 21, 2013 12:00:22 GMT -4 Yea I kind of figured after I had post it that navy blue wasn't to good of a choice since the board is dark

Post by Anthony "Future" Washington on Jan 21, 2013 3:02:15 GMT -4

Post by Jules on Jan 21, 2013 8:36:00 GMT -4

Post by Eric Steel on Jan 21, 2013 10:35:11 GMT -4

Post by Anthony "Future" Washington on Jan 21, 2013 12:00:22 GMT -4