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Post by The Main Attraction on Aug 3, 2013 17:43:16 GMT -4
Irrelevant: Totally not my style of music. 'Nuff about that! Relevant: Actually really impressed by your voice. Pretty well-produced too. It's a bit hard for me to comment on if it's objectively 'good' or not within its genre, but there are elements I like. The backing track's fun, though possibly a bit overblown. That 'uh-huh' gets to be irritating fairly quickly, and distracts from your solid micwork. I'd either make the backing more minimalistic in general, or at least bump your voice a touch higher in the mix. As it is, the mix sounds a bit too busy, and that's coming from someone who loves prog rock.  Thanks alot for the feedback and I've actually bumped up the vocals, so that they're more upfront. but if I may ask, what do mean you mean the mix sounds a bit too busy? so that I can catch/work on that. |
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Post by The Main Attraction on Aug 16, 2013 20:08:03 GMT -4
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Post by Jason Cashe on Aug 19, 2013 17:01:13 GMT -4
I've been slacking Mannie, I will check this out soon. Hopefully tonight as I want to get on and write some shit, do a few matches and maybe take a few more plus listen to this. So yeah, it's surely in the plans.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Aug 20, 2013 0:33:29 GMT -4
So I checked out "GO" and "This My!" which had a feature with JMoneyDaKidd.
I think you've improved in the sense that you can hear your true voice now. I been telling you to do that man so it's good to finally hear that. Kind of reminds me of my boy Tito Lopez with the flow. I've had conversation with Lopez before he signed to Interscope. He's a humble dude who does him regardless and has his own sound and flow. So it's a praise me comparing you to him.
I liked both songs though, even though "Go" was short and more of a freestyle sound clip but I'm sure it wasn't freestyled. I also liked JMoneyDaKidd but felt you did a more solid job than he did on the track. I still think there is work to do, work on the lyrics, crisp it a bit more and you'll be rolling nicely. Post more when you get it uploaded man.
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Post by The Main Attraction on Aug 20, 2013 10:44:13 GMT -4
So I checked out "GO" and "This My!" which had a feature with JMoneyDaKidd. I think you've improved in the sense that you can hear your true voice now. I been telling you to do that man so it's good to finally hear that. Kind of reminds me of my boy Tito Lopez with the flow. I've had conversation with Lopez before he signed to Interscope. He's a humble dude who does him regardless and has his own sound and flow. So it's a praise me comparing you to him. I liked both songs though, even though "Go" was short and more of a freestyle sound clip but I'm sure it wasn't freestyled. I also liked JMoneyDaKidd but felt you did a more solid job than he did on the track. I still think there is work to do, work on the lyrics, crisp it a bit more and you'll be rolling nicely. Post more when you get it uploaded man. Wow! History has been made people, Jason Kash actually gave me a positive review. Now I can retire lol. Thanks dude I appreciate you listening/reviewing both songs. If I may ask though did you have a favorite line from me, in the "This My!" track? |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Aug 20, 2013 20:04:45 GMT -4
A favorite line? Odd request. And you're retiring? (Haters everyone slap me for not being nicer earlier) Don't retire..(They now slap me for saying that) Improve and produce, you're doing well. As for the line? I gave it a once listen so I'll give it a second and find the part I really liked cause I had to hear the other guy to know you went first. Haha.
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Aug 25, 2013 0:33:31 GMT -4
Go: It was a good teaser and did the job of drawing the listener in and making them want more. I heard a little Kanye in the last four bars. Is he one of your influences?
This My: Good job on the hook. Very simple and catchy, which is good if you are trying to appeal to the mainstream and target that market. Your verse was way better than your boy's. His verse wasn't bad and he had a good rapping voice but it just didn't draw me in.
Keep posting more stuff.
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Post by The Main Attraction on Aug 25, 2013 0:49:37 GMT -4
Go: It was a good teaser and did the job of drawing the listener in and making them want more. I heard a little Kanye in the last four bars. Is he one of your influences? You could say that, he was a very early influence on me as far being honest with my music. But thanks for noticing the passion in the verse.This My: Good job on the hook. Very simple and catchy, which is good if you are trying to appeal to the mainstream and target that market. Your verse was way better than your boy's. His verse wasn't bad and he had a good rapping voice but it just didn't draw me in. Haha thanks, that's the first time I heard someone flat out say that I had a better verse. Wait are you sure? I was the first verse in-case you didn't know (IE: Kash).Keep posting more stuff. Of course dude, I will for sure and once again thanks for listening. |
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Post by The Main Attraction on Sept 23, 2013 14:35:26 GMT -4
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 23, 2013 19:09:14 GMT -4
Maybe it's cause I'm on my phone but the website loads and says they can't find that page. The other links work just fine though.
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Post by The Main Attraction on Sept 23, 2013 19:26:31 GMT -4
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