issue #1 Origins

[warrenpeace]

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First ever Emerald Assassin rp. I learned already that despite wanting to make this as close to actually reading a comic as possible all of the the thought bubbles and word balloon notes really eat up valuable word from the limit.

That aside this rp was a test run of things to come, I aim to explore all faucets of comic books from the dark to the light hearted.

Wondering what you thought of the plot and overall tone. I aim t keep things more on the action comedy side of things, but every comic character needs something dark that springs them into action.

also superheros in wrestling are not a new concept which is why I aim to be groundbreaking with the styles of rps more than anything.

There's tons of easter eggs and references so kudos to anyone who can name them all.

anyway it's a drastic change from what you are all used to seeing from me and as excited as i am to write this character and blend genres I am just as excited to hear from my peers and get their opinions.

[Lord Raab]

As promised in the PM. I give you some feedback since it's only fair that you gave me some tips for segments the other day.

I'm really enjoying your RP's with this new character as of late and it's made me want to read more and more of your Emerald Assassin stuff. I really love the realistic comic graphic in the RP as it really makes it stand out. I'm reading this first RP as if I am reading a comic and to me that's the most creative thing I've ever seen in all of my time as an RPer.

What I also love about the RP is that you in-cooperated your opponent and wrestling into the comic as well. Just flat out really good RP around and a very entertaining one at that.

There really isn't anything I dislike at all but keep the awesome work up and I hope to see more comic RP's in the future.

[warrenpeace]

Thanks Raab. Unfortunately I did not have the time to do a comic page for the second issue yet due to work. But I do plan to continue doing them.

Your input is appreciated.

[Lord Raab]

No problem. I very rarely give feedback if at all to other people mainly because I'm not that good at giving it but you earned my respect big time that I had to give you feedback.

[Jace]

I like the rp's like Raab said very creative. I've never seen anything like it. To the match writers I don't know what Warren would think but to me adding to the character with action sounds when he does things would give more of a comic feel to me. Like when he punches some You could write Pow, Bang or boom. Little things like that to me would give the character a boost in what Warren is trying to do. I hope you like the idea Warren

[warrenpeace]

^ yeah, I had included those in my segments last week. It's something I plan to use, but sparingly atm. I am exploring all aspects of comics. Most people associate that with the campy batman, which is what I am going for tonally atm. However I plan to deconstruct the entire medium so I am using everything sparingly so I can continue to add and fit more in.

Thanks for taking the time to post Jace.