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Post by biggs on Sept 9, 2013 21:55:50 GMT -4
Sorry for the lateness of the show! Between my 49ers game, the issues with my roommate (which thankfully have been somewhat resolved, but will not be discussed in depth out of respect for my roommate), a late day at work, and computer issues, this was probably one of the most convoluted, difficult postings of Asylum ever!
Still, big thanks to Shadow, Kash, and Envi for matches, and thanks to Reaver, Raab, Kash, Savage, Mannie, Sally, Envi, Logan Alexander and I'm sure I'm probably forgetting somebody for segs! Please feel free to correct my oversite below, as well as discuss the show! Here's the template:
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match):
What was your favorite match on the card:
Favorite Segment:
Favorite moment in the show:
Who was the show’s MVP:
Additional comments:
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Post by biggs on Sept 9, 2013 22:00:17 GMT -4
Also, if you need next card off, please PM me by tomorrow!
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B.A. Styles
Low Carder
I'm always up for co-segments, so if you want to write one then feel free to shoot me a PM. ^.^
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Post by B.A. Styles on Sept 10, 2013 2:08:57 GMT -4
I wanna invade the show and fight Stefan Raab, lol.  |
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Post by Lord Raab on Sept 10, 2013 3:13:44 GMT -4
Not happening Pete as I'm officially off the next card but you could on the October show though.
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Post by Shadow on Sept 10, 2013 13:01:41 GMT -4
I will contribute to this tonight
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 10, 2013 14:05:07 GMT -4
Yeah I'll do this for sure a bit later today. Gots to go shower and wash thy balls! Sticky Heat in Texas is HORSE SHIT bad sometimes and well today was just...Ehhh
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Sept 10, 2013 16:03:36 GMT -4
I'll leave some feedback either tonight or tomorrow. Been extremely busy lately.
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Post by Lord Raab on Sept 10, 2013 16:16:29 GMT -4
All I have to say is congratulations to the hardest worker ever on Asylum Knuckles on winning a title. He deserved it and I'm proud of my friend for doing that. Congrats again Knucks.
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Post by Shadow on Sept 10, 2013 17:11:57 GMT -4
Yeah I'll do this for sure a bit later today. Gots to go shower and wash thy balls! Sticky Heat in Texas is HORSE SHIT bad sometimes and well today was just...Ehhh Where you at in Texas, Kash? |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 10, 2013 18:59:28 GMT -4
Houston, only place in Texas I'll agree to live and I was born here. My dick Boss had the AC on like 80 today and I wanted to kick him in the butthole.
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Post by Lord Raab on Sept 10, 2013 19:15:36 GMT -4
I've already PMed you about having the show off Biggs a while ago.
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Post by Shadow on Sept 10, 2013 23:18:02 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in: Well I did write my match, but I will go on record to say the finish was a surprise. Lol I didn't write those. Anyway so my thoughts on the finish. I thought it wasn't as effective a finish as the writer wanted it to be. Main reason being the fact they only threw punches throughout the ten count. I would have liked to see it mixed up, head smashes on barricades, ring steps and the apron maybe even Sentinel trying to throw sand in Shadow's face toward the end of the ten count or as the brawl moves away from the ring. After the match there was the barricade head smash and then the brawl into the crowd. Which let to a beach brawl (I think the writer was going for a semi-street fight. Blood making the save for Sentinel was good, I think a chair shot from behind would have been even more effective [He brought one out  ] Because with the constant comebacks from both men it would have looked more powerful and given them the edge they need to toss Shadow into the water, although I'll admit, I thought that was a bit campy. I think it would have worked better with smaller wrestlers. Sentinel and Shadow are both behemoths, you're not going to be able to throw a mammoth very far even with some practice swings. I do think it was a great way to remind everyone that this wasn't your usual arena show. It was a good try at something and can be looked upon for future shows like this. And to the writer (who I assume was Biggs lol) I also understand there were computer issues so it had to be put together quick. What was your favorite match on the card: I will say the AJP/Sally Talford match was. Sally is an iconic APW Diva-Star, and regardless of how the victory was claimed I think it really pushes Talford on the return. AJP is a major heel and Talford being the face this is just good chemistry. Mannie making his presence known is like a chemical mixture that makes chaos. This is going to go places. The opening of the match was a great way for AJP to draw some heat and give Talford her return shine. Favorite Segment: This was tough. Ive commented on a few segments below because they didn't have the flair to get this spot this time. Im going with the Mannie segment because it just fed into the match that followed. Mannie's handler has a great way to get his character across and with someone like Sally Talford on the other side of the battle line you can expect some combustible chemistry from the two. If the back and forth between them is a preview of what's to come then I'm greatly looking forward to what they have. Favorite moment in the show: Reaver snagging gold. This has been something a long time in the making. Reaver is an extremely dedicated worker who has contributed a great deal to APW and yes I'll say he earned it. Storyline wise I also think its a great boost because now the fans are really happy. First Reaver takes back Asylum, now he robs Raab of his title? Reaver is the hero right now... (See below) Who was the show’s MVP: Im going to go with Raab on this one. Raab has done a lot for Asylum with this storyline he is running. And while it may SEEM like this chapter is coming to a close what with Stefan losing both the show and the belt, I think we're just in the eye of the storm. I think Raab taking a few weeks of personal time OCC really can contribute to this too. Because it allows Raab (IC) to get stepped on a little after his abuse of power. Then if you think Star Wars - whats next: The Empire Strikes Back. Raab's real wave of terror is just on the horizon and there are several different ways it can go. Additional comments: To Sentinel: great working with you again, but I was perplexed by the way you went with your roleplay. It seemed like the characters were A) trying to put some Aloe Vera on a bad sunburn (IE trying to make the situation "better"). B) Attempt a semi-face turn or C) ignoring the fact they just decimated Shadow a few weeks earlier. It really felt a little slow to me and didnt have the same atmosphere as earlier roleplays. Ive enjoyed seeing the darker side of Sentinel, it wasn't there this time. Just seemed kind of like an "in transition" roleplay. With the previous heat built from the Gauntlet match and the incident at both Shockwave and Meltdown, Talon should have been all boast and bravado while Sentinel continues to project his monstrous image. Logan Alexander is leaving APW? Hrm. Is there more to this or other reasons? The whole segment seemed slow and didn't carry the impact I think the writer wanted. Maybe it's because of the dialogue: the reasoning (concussions accompanied by a compendium of losses) To me it came across like LA was "taking his ball and going home." The AJP/Marvin segment: Its all about the "on air" chemistry. The storyline with Unforgiven is being drug out though. This would have been the night for the climax. Then on the next show, the faces get their push at the end of the show (like they did). Namely, because I think if ANYONE was going to show up and shit in Unforgiven's cereal that night, it would be Shadow. I understand Unforgiven has several storylines going and the best way to work two storylines is one week for one SL, then the second SL on the next show. But as for the AJP/Terry segment it was interesting to see AJP "put in her place." Although I can't help but ask, is this going to push AJP's mental breakdown and if it does, how so? I wasn't seeing that. Thanks to everyone for their hard work and congratulations to all the winners! |
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 11, 2013 0:16:32 GMT -4
What was your favorite match on the card: What makes a favorite? Is it what match I was pleased with most? Reaver vs. Raab. Or is favorite match which match I was taken back from, which dropped my jaw and kept me on the edge of my seat? Sally Vs. AJP. We'll call it a tie.
Favorite Segment: The beach setting had me enjoying all of the writing that contributed to being on a beach. So for sake of saying one or another? Post Match with Unforgiven and AJP/Tyler Harrison. Makes me want to see the end, know the story. I'm intrigued so I'm sold.
Favorite moment in the show: Reaver diving into the crowd as the New Suicidal Champion. I shed a tea...No I didn't but I couldn't be happier for someone else becoming a Champion! YO ADRIAN!! Tommy Dreamer did it! He beat Raven!!
Who was the show’s MVP: Reaver. Four years in the making..
Additional comments: Stellar show, some shocks and twists and further building storylines that only help a show. Nothing thrown together at random in storylines, all have a purpose and it's felt. From Sally and Mannie to AJP needing to Pay Up! To TMarv being an ASSHOLE but defending his belt like he's fucking superman..There is purpose here and to me purpose makes things entertaining not for just those involved but those watching these shows as well. So as the "Interim GM" (In Character Only, god I'd never do staff) I thank you all for being involved with Asylum, with APW in general. If anyone wants to do segments and wants me involved, hit me up. I'll do next to everything to have fun and entertain.
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Post by Lord Raab on Sept 11, 2013 7:24:43 GMT -4
Thanks Shadow. Yeah I kind of need to make Stefan more of a serious wrestler than he is currently and I think him going in that violent and dangerous path of beating everyone in sight including staff members will be the best way to go to get my confidence up again since I couldn't do it as a GM but now I can. I will try and develop it through segments when I come back with the whole violent and dangerous side of him rather than just talking shit in the ring, backstage and in the locker rooms all the time although I need Biggs's permission to attack the staff members but I'm sure he would be OK with the idea along with being forced to wrestle and Jason Kash being GM will send Stefan absolotely crazy.
I felt my segment was the worst one on the show cos I had no idea what I was going to do until the last minute so I hope to everyone else that it wasn't too bad and enjoyed reading it.
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Post by Lord Raab on Sept 11, 2013 7:28:54 GMT -4
Oh and by the way Shadow I'm a female. I just play a male character that's all.
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Sept 11, 2013 9:01:12 GMT -4
Kanye West: I'm sorry, but Anthony Bailey kicking out of the Whiplash was one of the best Asylum moments of all time!
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Post by Shadow on Sept 12, 2013 8:11:15 GMT -4
Im bumping this because we NEED more feedback people!
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Post by Reaver on Sept 12, 2013 11:14:25 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match): i honestly thought it was a lil short but i understand the time frame and pressure biggs was under so no worries. the point got across and i feel that was the purpose. believe when i say theres more coming What was your favorite match on the card: Sally vs AJP although i didnt appreciate the ending, it builds towards mannie vs sally which has been teasing us for a long time. my god ive got blue balls over this LOL. just fuck, fight and get on with it then again, a rasslemania match might be worth the wait ya no? Favorite Segment: Sentinal and Shadow fighting backstage after their match. i love a good brawl! Favorite moment in the show: Bailey kicking out of the whiplash! terry is a beast and kicking out of the move that put so many others down is amazing Who was the show’s MVP: this goes to bailey and raab collectively. raab works her ass off to b consistent and bailey's efforts certainly deserve to b here Additional comments: i cant believe i finally won a title. the true test is how long and believe im going for callahans record. |
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Post by The Main Attraction on Sept 12, 2013 13:42:20 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match): The ending wasn't Mannie's fault, she stepped on his Adidas.
What was your favorite match on the card: In all honestly, it was AJP Vs Sally. It was a match I was looking forward too as a fan, so it was IMO the match of the night.
Favorite Segment: The opener with Kash being introduced as the Warden, I mean it's Jason Kash damn it; and now he runs the place. Nuff Said!
Favorite moment in the show: Come on? No question, it was Reaver's title win. This guy is one of the hardest worker's in E-fedding IMO, and honestly it's ABOUT DAMN TIME.
Who was the show’s MVP: I would say Reaver, he has definitively earned it. The dude has come a long way and it's finally has payed off. He's won his first APW championship, and the he's always in the mix. Whether it's in the ME scene or otherwise, he's is always fun to watch. So kudos on a much anticipated and long overdue title win.
Additional comments: A lot of feuds & storylines being moved along, and it looks like there are no plans of any of it slowing down. Thus I expect more great writing from everyone involved in the future. So I hope everyone keeps up the good work and stays encouraged.
-Mannie
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] Because with the constant comebacks from both men it would have looked more powerful and given them the edge they need to toss Shadow into the water, although I'll admit, I thought that was a bit campy. I think it would have worked better with smaller wrestlers. Sentinel and Shadow are both behemoths, you're not going to be able to throw a mammoth very far even with some practice swings. I do think it was a great way to remind everyone that this wasn't your usual arena show. It was a good try at something and can be looked upon for future shows like this.
