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Post by President Jeff on Sept 12, 2013 20:22:33 GMT -4
Thanks to Evan, Madison and Level One For writing matches. And an extra huge thanks to Shione who wrote 4 matches
Thanks to Level One, Rebel, Shione, Leon, Madison and Myself for writing segments.
Please take a second and leave some feedback
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match):
What was your favorite match on the card:
Favorite Segment:
Favorite moment in the show:
Who was the show’s MVP:
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Post by Chris Madison on Sept 13, 2013 0:24:21 GMT -4
Don't forget I wrote a match...
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Post by Shione "SURGE" Ōshima on Sept 13, 2013 5:50:13 GMT -4
I was gonna say, FIVE?! Four is enough for now, I think! L1 saved me from the next number up... What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match): Another *squee* week, no duh! The best I think you can say about anyone's match-writing for your character is that they actually end up giving YOU some insight, and some inspiration for a coming promo or segment. I had some stuff in the wings already, but a moment or two here cemented it. I'll also add, coz I didn't last time: the interpretation here of what Shione - who, despite mostly being brawn n' energy, does have some recent technical training - would do when faced with an opponent twice her freakin' size was awesome. Again, this just adds to MY character and that gives me warm fuzzies every time. Great job, once more, thank you! <3 What was your favorite match on the card: Of the two I can legitimately pick from without being a horse's ass, I'll go for the opener actually. For a brutal beating with a foregone conclusion this was really fun to read... and much-needed for the Black Hand this week. Favorite Segment: I'll go for Rebel's which basically makes it a tie with the ending, since they're effectively a two-parter! The first was well-placed though, emphasizing where the real crux of the show was, and goddamn that man can cut a promo. Favorite moment in the show: Probably out of left field, but let's go with the group hug, for sheer WTFery. I laughed. Who was the show’s MVP: Johnny Rebel. I was all frantic writing matches this week and didn't go back to read enough old stuff, so I basically said 'fuck it' and had fun with him... I think it worked? Regardless, he sells himself awesomely, and one way or another this show hinged on him; he's a potent threat to L1 and the Synndicate, and his presence is making for an enthralling storyline. Additional comments: So I found a big regret in my writing; namely that the tone and commentary in the main event, which frankly I mostly winged, really didn't chime with the vibe before and after, and makes it come off strange and confused. Maybe that doesn't not work, in some sense? But I'd have written differently if I'd interpreted the situation better, and I can't help but regret that. Outside of my own stuff, but ending up on a similar note - I look forward to seeing how Amy responds to events in her next RP. I'm not sure I really bought her just taking off into the crowd, though I totally see why it was done; god knows I've made some concessions for an easy narrative myself, haha. Collaborative writing and frantic twist-turns often create awkwardness, and that's just something we have to deal with on occasion. I'm thinking I might start shooting some more PMs around on match-writing days, though.  |
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Post by Chris Madison on Sept 13, 2013 13:58:17 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in: Well I wrote the match so I won't comment on the match itself. I was a little bummed Kurt no showed again. When he popped back up in time for the battle royal he seemed anxious to put something together between him and the black hand. Obviously not going to happen, hope all is well with him and he can find a place more suitable for his availability.
What was your favorite match on the card: everything Shione wrote? Lol, excellent writing yet again. Great job and once again pulled a lot of weight to get this show up. If I had to pick one, the main event. I don't think I can count on one hand the amount of times I've seen Level One lose a match since I've gotten here. Big win for Johnny Rebel and Amy Zing!
Favorite Segment: Jeff and the four ladies of Overdrive. This was well written and translated well. The type of segment you can imagine happening on real television. Plus we get a fatal four way bra and panties match out of it for the North American Championship!
Favorite moment in the show: Shione wins again. Since her debut loss to Kurt Styles she has been on fire in APW. It's a great character and the handler is a great writer. The sky is the limits with Shione...and she's proving it week after week
Who was the show’s MVP: Johnny Rebel, big night for Rebel in his return. Looking forward to see what else they have in store for obviously what will be Rebel vs Level One at ONIH
Additional comments: unfortunately this show seemed to be missing a lot. We're all at fault here. The lack of segments really made this show lack momentum. Hopefully everyone can recoup and come back with some good stuff next week.
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Post by President Jeff on Sept 15, 2013 11:50:58 GMT -4
Bump
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