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Post by President Jeff on Sept 26, 2013 20:06:50 GMT -4
Thanks to Jace, Shione, Biggs and Kash for writing matches
Thanks to Level One, Rebel, CJ, Biggs, Jace, Hollywood, AC, Kash, Madison and Atlas for writing segments. If I missed someone, let me know
Please take a second and leave some feedback
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match):
What was your favorite match on the card:
Favorite Segment:
Favorite moment in the show:
Who was the show’s MVP:
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 26, 2013 21:04:03 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match): Wasn't in a match but I wrote Rebel Vs. Madison and REALLY hope they like it for what it was. I didn't know how much time I had before the show was gonna be needed so I capped it shorter than even I wanted.
What was your favorite match on the card: Even though he no showed, the Level One Vs. KnoxVILLE was pretty good. I wanted more from KnoxVILLE here and just didn't get it. The aftermath was pretty good too.
Favorite Segment: The Segments made this show to me. It had a good flavor of people and really built story for everyone doing something. Synndicate and Sindicate which is on again and new again! Rebel and Level One is nice to see again, I am a fan of both and the recruiting bits were great. Well played. Space Cowboys are the perfect blend of characters to work against a group like Black Hand. The all good, no bad characters of Gates and Biggs against the dirty, newer, and numbers growing Black Hand. Just works.
Favorite moment in the show: I wrote the Office Party segment just at random. Left the punishment match open for Jeff to edit. I didn't think he'd bury me under the arena with a match, like I'm really being punished or something. Just throw me to the biggest fucking wolf out there huh? Heh. Nah, I've wanted to do this for a while and it was surprising but I'm game. The worst that can happen is I lose but the best that could happen could be his worst so there is silver lining right?
Who was the show’s MVP: Match Writers. Without them around, nobody can really enjoy the aspects of this game.
Additional comments: I need anyone who's EVER beaten Level One to send me a blue print RIGHT NOW. Anyone got any throwing salts? I'll take bath salts too, never know how that'd work inside a ring but damnit we'll try and find out!
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Post by President Jeff on Sept 26, 2013 21:32:06 GMT -4
lol, you said you wanted someone tough. Doesn't get tougher than Level One  |
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Post by Chris Madison on Sept 26, 2013 22:16:08 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you we’re in (applicable only if you didn’t write your own match): Kash did a hell of a job writing the match. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Especially Madison slapping the headset off Chase, nice touch. Rebel looks to be in good form and ready for Level-One
What was your favorite match on the card: Probably mine with Rebel. Again, Kash did a hell of a job. All the match writers did but this one stood out to me.
Favorite Segment: Really enjoyed Rebel/Felippe trying to recruit the locker room for their cause and the interactions of some of the boys in the back. AC Smith had me chuckling.
Favorite moment in the show: Kash/Jeff office scene. Kash to me is always an enjoyable character. With his off the wall antics, its a nice change of speed from most of our very serious characters.
Who was the show’s MVP: Johnny Rebel, big win over me...gained a lot of momentum towards ONIH with all the segments and the post main event actions.
Additional comments: Show was very segment heavy but thats not necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes you need that to push the story lines. ONIH is shaping up to be a pretty sweet PPV.
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Post by Atlas Adams on Sept 26, 2013 23:23:35 GMT -4
I'll leave my feedback tomorrow when I fully read the show. I just wanted to say that I want to tweak my move set, take out the shooting star press to the outside cause someone already does it.
Also, if I no show with no explanation, feel free to job me out in quick fashion. I say this not as a knock to anyone that no showed but one, jobber like matches do happen in real wrestling and two, the staff that work on these shows need the promo writers to make me really invest in an epic match.
Also props to Level one on the segment I was in. I approved everything but didn't do much.
I have an idea for my next promo and maybe someone will want to be my wingman.
in depth feed tomorrow or Saturday.
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Post by Shione "SURGE" Ōshima on Sept 27, 2013 6:02:06 GMT -4
What are your thoughts on the match you were in: Terrible. Fire the match writer.
What was your favorite match on the card: Madison vs. Rebel - there was a good chance it was always going to be, but I wouldn't be allowed to say that if I'd written it! Kash did a good job. Dammit, Kash, stop making me wish you were on Overdrive every time you pop up, haha. Seriously, for all it was short (to be fair, they pretty much all were this week) it was exciting and brutal. Thumbs up.
Favorite Segment: As Madison mentioned, this was very segment-heavy! All of it served a purpose and I enjoyed all of them, but I'm going to cheat like hell and pick the ending to the last match. I wrote the match but not the ending so it's a segment to me, dammit! I was NOT happy with my writing last night and I loathed the ending I put on this. So glad someone erased it and made it worthwhile. Best of all, it even gives some narrative flow to the rest of what I wrote... so basically, my ass got saved and that's why it's my favourite. Deal with it.
Favorite moment in the show: This is gonna seem hella random but... Jeff siccing Kash with a Level-One match. Can't frickin' wait! Honestly I sort of wish I wasn't taking the week off now just for that. ...I'll probably have to at least pop out a segment or something.
Who was the show’s MVP: Johnny Rebel.
Additional comments: When I saw the match writing signups the other night I was totally miffed that this would turn out to be a duff show. It wasn't! Mostly saved by some sweet segments and, again as Madison noted, the build to ONIH. Despite a pretty ridonk number of no-shows/barely-shows (and frankly I'm counting myself in that) those who stood to gain something gained big. Future is bright. It's not my place to do this but, fuck it, thank you to everyone who RPed and everyone who wrote something for the show.
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Post by Jason Cashe on Sept 27, 2013 6:46:03 GMT -4
You're excited? I have been trying to get L1's attention on Twitter and OD when I've appeared. He's been OD longer than I've been Asylum which is almost 4 years in January. This is amazing fun for me, I add another Finisher to my Signatures. Kash been hit with Sally, TMarv, Gates, and Bailey's finishers. I have a list! Some I want to take just so Kash can say he ate them. Haha.
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