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Post by carl on Jan 18, 2009 11:18:47 GMT -4
Hi I would appreciate it if people could give me some feedback as been well busy this week and got this up and done and just hope you like it?
Trevor I used your Finisher as a one of tribute hope you didn't mind?
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Post by Jason Royce on Jan 18, 2009 13:16:17 GMT -4
nice rp man well written and love the full trotle at the end it was great mine should be up today had a brain fart last night lol
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Post by Crazyman on Jan 18, 2009 21:30:07 GMT -4
I liked the character development, it's always good to learn a little more about a character so the reader can build a more detailed picture of them. I would have liked to have seen a bit more trash talk. You made a couple of good points but i couldn't help feel it was a bit rushed. Of course, you've been busy, so that was probably to be expected.  Still, it was a pretty good roleplay. Good luck in your match! |
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Post by carl on Jan 19, 2009 14:41:54 GMT -4
Thanks for leaving feedback and I hop next week to be better and not have to rush but as they say real life comes first.
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The Paragon of Hardcore
Semi-Main Eventer
Already The IWC Insane Champion... Serioulsy, you people need to catch up...
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Post by The Paragon of Hardcore on Jan 20, 2009 12:42:58 GMT -4
That was cool. Carl Cage is officially given permission to Full Throttle people. But he has to strike a Crucifix Pose afterwards...
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Post by carl on Jan 20, 2009 19:05:42 GMT -4
Sure man and thanks maybe I will do the Crucifix Pose next time lol
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