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Post by michaelharris on Apr 8, 2012 3:17:28 GMT -4
I know this is going to come off as a shock to a lot of people that I even have this done. Just 24hrs after getting the news that was broken to me. I had the entire day to myself and I couldn't really talk to my friends due to them handling funeral arrangements and stuff. Had the whole day to myself with nothing to do and noone to talk too. So I decided to keep myself busy and my mind off things. Thus this rp being done. No need to rush with feedback and I know there's a lot of character development in it. Not expecting to win, but more so start to get Harris's name out there. As well as provide a good fight for the main event. Good luck to Noble btw in case he reads this. Anyway, just pick it apart and let me know what you guys think when you got the time. Like I said no rush.
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Post by Calvin Ingram on Apr 8, 2012 3:50:20 GMT -4
+Ceebz Feedback+ Harris is going through similar issues like that of you in real life emotionally wrecked to a certain extent. I liked the concept of you trying to prove a certain point. I'm not considered to do long feedback as well i'm no analyst. I'm a writer so consider this as a summary of everything I took from your roleplay. Chris Hart was tough of an opponent last week but you pulled it off much to his mistakes. I know people are busy but like in Yarmouth's case the sooner you put up something the more people will invest in you. Not saying late rps can't win you the match as Hart won for Team Overdrive with an entry one minute after deadline. You put to canvas a greatly crafted story of Harris' woes. He feels left in the dark by his ex wife and I understand this. I know you switched pic bases but your character reminds so much of Jeff Jarrett. He's not that big or that small with people always doubting his abilities. He knows he's that damn good and develops a sort of ego. But the one thing he considers his most prized procession is his family. He will lay down his life for the kids he brought into this very world within a heartbeat. He's defensive with Pheonix but deep down he knows that one day he'll forgive his ex wife. And what if the shoe was on the other foot. Entertainers have cheated on the road more than one but in a Jarrett type sense he's faithful and a good father. Hence why I keep dwelling on your old pic base. You built up Noble well stating who he is but you don't consider yourself short of Great as well. Harris is conflicted and emotionally unstable at this point and I see you building on it hopefully in the near future. You should go full on crazy as that'll be entertaining. Hell,even have segments on Overdrive with Doctors questions his validity to compete. But I do see more strengths than weaknesses. Keep Up The Good Work!!!  |
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Post by T-Marv on Apr 8, 2012 9:57:15 GMT -4
Got some feed back coming tonight after the Easter festivities
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Post by michaelharris on Apr 9, 2012 23:18:34 GMT -4
bump ;D
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