Feedback Sought Please

[Shadow]

Hello all,

I was hoping to request feedback on some of my roleplays. These were written over the past year. Right now, Im trying to find my "zone" for writing roleplays so that both the content and myself (as a writer and the character itself) stay fresh. If anyone has the time to review any or all of the roleplays and offer feedback, I would greatly appreciate it. These were selected because I consider them some of my best work (lol if its crap please tell me so) and the content focuses on some of APW's best Megastars, who I am honored to have worked with.

This was one of my first roleplays when I first went to Meltdown
apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=meltdownrp&action=display&thread=10622

This was my last official meltdown RP for One Night in hell (all shoot)
apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=onenightinhell2012&action=display&thread=12567

This was my last roleplay before Rasslemania (Overdrive)
apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=odrp2012&action=display&thread=16526

[Evan De Parker]

For the record, I will definitely get to this within the next 48 hours.

[Shadow]

Sweet, Thank you!