Have I improved since February?

[Lord Raab]

Yeah so I'm asking if I have improved since I last asked for feedback in February if people remember since I don't really know if I have. It's alright to say if I haven't. Let me know if you want the links to my RP's and I will put some in tonight as I'm currently typing on my phone at the moment. What do you think?

[Jules]

Post a link from Feb (any RP), and a link for your most recent RP and I'll send you a little feedback.

Also, is there anything specific in the roleplays you'd like me to pay attention to? e.g. storytelling, characterisation, promo work etc.

[Lord Raab]

Um just really what you think of my improvement of my RP's from what you said back in February that I needed to improve on like burying, German side of Stefan gimmick and if I changed the way I made Stefan more hated than just being a mouthy prick. Anyway here's the first RP from February against TJ.

apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=iwcrps&action=display&thread=16396

Here's my latest one against Terry Marvin.

apwprez.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=iwcrps&action=display&thread=17821

Thanks in advance dude.

[Jules]

Thanks. I'll get back to you on this, although I can't guarantee it'll be before T4TB, but early next week at the latest.

[Lord Raab]

That's fine. Take your time as I understand about RPing for your title match.

[Jules]

Sorry, I forgot about this but I'm getting onto it now.